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A Child's Love

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Julie
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0 posted 10-04-1999 03:58 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Julie

a childs'
secrets
whispering
innocence
a little voice
"I love you
so much"
tiny soft arms
wrapped
around my neck
words spoken
in its own voice
a moment of eternity
within my breast.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



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Skyfyre
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1 posted 10-04-1999 05:10 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

A tender and touching sentiment ...

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


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2 posted 10-04-1999 08:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

It's the best, isn't it, Julie?! And so is your poem!

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Denise
Tara Simms
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3 posted 10-04-1999 11:09 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Beautiful! "a moment of eternity" I love that!
Julie
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4 posted 10-04-1999 11:20 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Thank you Nocht, Denise, Tara!

As I wrote this I remembered those
wonderful hugs from my granddaughter.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-05-1999 08:37 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very touching Julie
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 10-05-1999 10:09 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Julie,
Touched me , well done.
Pepper
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heartwarming....beautifully done....a wonderful read Julie

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Julie
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8 posted 10-05-1999 02:15 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Thank you Seymour, Pepper, and hoot.

It warms my heart that you enjoyed this so.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



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