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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-10-04 02:03 PM


i want to bleed
all the time
just to know what
lies behind
stars that blind
i need to bleed
just a little
or else i might just slip away
would you hold me tighter
my invisible love
only i can see
through jaded faded
violent eyes
you make the shadows
i would love to become one..
be one with you..
die a little with me
today
and always..



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Dragoness
Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

1 posted 1999-10-05 10:14 AM


Nicely done....good read!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
2 posted 1999-10-05 11:08 AM


this one made me cry. life is so lonely sometimes

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



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