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Moonshine
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since 10-01-1999
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0 posted 10-04-1999 04:58 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

You bring to me
An internal calm
And you warm my soul
When I am wrapped tight in your arms
The sweet smell of your hair
And the touch of your velvet skin
So warm and so soft.......
You touch me so deep within
The touch of your perfect lips
Upon my quivering own
Feels like Heaven on Earth
A whole new world to me you've shown.
© Copyright 1999 Jen - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 10-04-1999 08:38 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautifully romantic.....welcome to Passions, looking forward to more

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Dark Angel
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2 posted 10-04-1999 10:22 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Moonshine, WOW! This is truly beautiful and romantic. I loved it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


3 posted 10-04-1999 11:49 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Very soothing with expectations.
Denise
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4 posted 10-04-1999 07:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Quite lovely!

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Denise
Alwye
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In the space between moments


5 posted 10-04-1999 09:00 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Ah, so very romantic, moonshine! Welcome to the Passions Family!!!

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Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


suicidal dreams
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since 09-28-1999
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6 posted 10-04-1999 09:02 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

Quite beutiful, vey rarely do I use such a word but heck I liked your poem keep posting im hoping for more from you.

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life is short kill quick
Moonshine
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7 posted 10-04-1999 09:19 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Thanx Hoot_owl,

My poetry is all about getting my feelings out and lol I have a lot of feelings ( as does everyone) therefore I have lots of poems. I am looking forward to posting more.
Moonshine
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8 posted 10-04-1999 09:21 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

DarkAngel,

I am glad that you liked the poem. It is a special one to me. Thanx for your support.
suicidal dreams
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9 posted 10-04-1999 09:21 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

Im glad youll be posting more

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Moonshine
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10 posted 10-04-1999 09:24 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Dear Sunshine,

Thanx for your comments - can you expand on the expectations comment more?
Moonshine
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11 posted 10-04-1999 09:29 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Dear dsnyder,

Thanx for your comments and encouragement.
Moonshine
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12 posted 10-04-1999 09:31 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Dear Alwye,

THanx for your lovely comments and the wonderful warm welcome : )
Moonshine
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13 posted 10-04-1999 09:34 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Dear Suicidal Dreams,

Thanx for your lovely comments! I will be posting more of my work soon I think.
 
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