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Severn
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0 posted 10-04-1999 02:59 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Severn

(for Chris)

You think
I wouldn't esteem you?
Two weeks
and I would run?
To where?
With what?
I couldn't walk
a step away
you're holding half
of me
(the better half)
in your heart
My legs would
flop, my arms flail
and I'd turn
and walk right back
against my will
or not!
I couldn't leave
the sum of my soul
fear not
for a star
that can't move
without the pull
of gravity
you are
the force of me
my dove
rolling eyes or not!!!!

KM
© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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1 posted 10-04-1999 03:22 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Can a guy help it if he's a bit nervous???
And what makes you think that I'd let you leave anyway???hmmm?
LOL, this is too cute love!
Michael
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2 posted 10-04-1999 03:24 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Severn,
Beautiful poem. I believe in little things like forever and trust. Chris, tell her you love her already, would ya! wishing you two every happiness.

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Michael Anderson

The coldest lies are often told in silence.


Severn
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3 posted 10-04-1999 03:25 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I would have to say, on recent evidence, that YOU are too cute....
Christopher
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<-----blushing!
And Michael, thank you, I have, and mean it, though the words seem so inadequate.
Severn
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5 posted 10-04-1999 04:00 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Michael - thanks!!! Wishing you and your love every happiness too, you know.
hoot_owl_rn
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Beautiful one Severn, I really like the message behind this one. I'm cheering you two on you know...oh, and I have seen that evidence and yes, he is too cute...LOL, I'd snag that one up real quick were I you

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
 
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