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Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-04 01:06 AM


I need you
To scare off the boogey man
You are the nightlight I need
Only in you
Is the hope of salvation
The possibilty of faith
You saved me from an eternity
With my own wretched soul
And the one who made me this way
I hope we stay like this forever


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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 1999-10-04 01:18 AM


How sweet, I hope you stay like that forever too!

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~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-10-04 01:25 AM


Beautifully spoken, Sys,
I hope you feel that way forever.

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Michael Anderson

The coldest lies are often told in silence.



Pufalove
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 119
Houston, Tx. USA
3 posted 1999-10-04 05:30 AM


Right on! You got it!

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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.


suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
4 posted 1999-10-04 07:10 PM


Glad to see U still have a love to hold after saturday.
P.S. quite nicely written

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life is short kill quick


[This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 10-04-1999).]

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-10-04 08:39 PM


Ditto! Very nicely done!

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Denise

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
6 posted 1999-10-04 08:45 PM


Wonder, heartfelt work...I enjoyed it!

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
7 posted 1999-10-05 01:25 PM


fervent.....I like the others,hope you feel that way forever too

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

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