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Little Angel

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Lucie
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0 posted 10-03-1999 11:09 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

Little angel with hair of gold.
return to heavenís warm enfold.
So glad I am you touched my world
you are Mommyís precious girl.

Though life was short you lived it well.
Touched many hearts and made them swell
with love and laughter, your tender smile.
Though you only stayed for just a while.

I send you now to God above
fill all the heavens with your love.
Play nicely with the children there.
My little angel with golden hair.

Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from my soul.
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 10-04-1999 12:36 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ok..pass the Kleenex! Very good, Lucie..so glad you put the disclaimer on it! My heart flip flopped when I read this!
Pufalove
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2 posted 10-04-1999 05:07 AM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

Ok Luc....this one is too sad. We need more of your happy, carefree ones. Good thing it wasn't any longer, I may never have come out of it! love ya

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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.

U K Hero
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3 posted 10-04-1999 05:35 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

What a lovely poem it made a tear in my eye, well done.
Michael
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4 posted 10-04-1999 05:41 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wonderful poem Lucie...sooo sad, though.

Good thing you posted the disclaimer, at least I won't have to bombard you with concerning emails this time...hehe

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Michael Anderson

The coldest lies are often told in silence.


hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-04-1999 08:36 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

So sad Lucie.....might I copy this for use in a grief packet given out to parents a on my unit who have lost infants at or before birth?

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
Lucie
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6 posted 10-04-1999 11:19 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Thank you all for your replies..


Hoot I would be honored!!!! Thank you so much.
JennyLee
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7 posted 10-04-1999 11:33 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Lucie,
I am filled with such emotion from your words...

Jenny
Lucie
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8 posted 10-04-1999 11:36 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Thanks JennyLee!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


9 posted 10-04-1999 04:18 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I can only ditto all of the others. How lovely that Hoot may use this to help others through the grieving process.
Skyfyre
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10 posted 10-04-1999 04:54 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Beautiful and hopeful, though the subject is a sad one ...


Nocht
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11 posted 10-04-1999 05:01 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Thanks Lucie....sometimes it gives parents great comfort to know they are allowed to grieve their loss and to know there are others that have felt all the emotions they are going through and it is normal to feel that way.
Hugs
Ruth

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
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12 posted 10-04-1999 09:00 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth



0
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(tears)

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Dragoness
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13 posted 10-05-1999 10:17 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Great poem, but oh so sad.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

poetFemmeFatale
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14 posted 10-05-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh Lucie, I have sat here and read all your works now for weeks....I've seen every side of you girl !! You go from naughty to nice, and back again now with a tear-jerker !!! Your broad spectrum of talent and emotion is wothy of applause !!! ***clapping

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Isis
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15 posted 10-05-1999 09:20 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I too had my heart in my mouth for a moment there until you said it hadn't actually happened to you. Beautifully done, you touched on the emotions well, I know as I've been there. Thanks.

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Sally S.
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16 posted 10-05-1999 11:20 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Heartbreaking!!! What a touching poem..whew! ~sniffles~
toocute4u_27
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17 posted 10-05-1999 11:32 PM       View Profile for toocute4u_27   Email toocute4u_27   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit toocute4u_27's Home Page   View IP for toocute4u_27

This poem touched my heart. I almost lost my twin girls at birth and my son and could not imagine the pain of losing something so precious. Very beautiful and heart breaking. Excuse me now for I must find kleenex.

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KJS
Denise
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18 posted 10-05-1999 11:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very heartwrenching. I wouldn't even want to imagine this kind of pain. Ditto the Kleenex.

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Denise
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