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Loud why, small cry

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Seymour Tabin
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Loud why, small cry

Old poems form new mulch
Tallow candles light.
New image enhance
Old stories', bright.

The crystal ball blinds
The pen in replay.
Eyes torn with litter,
Glitter old decay.

Loud why,
Small cry.
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Severn
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1 posted 10-03-1999 10:14 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very minimalist! I like your style Seymour, I really do. This has great imagery.
Seymour Tabin
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Severn,
Thank you for the read and comment.
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This is great!
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Very good! So few words saying so much!

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Denise
Seymour Tabin
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Sunshine and Denice,
Your comments were welcome and I thank you.
 
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