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Drifting Away

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 10-03-1999 10:09 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

Light dapples through entangled clouds
Tumbling gently in a silver flow
I wander upon a cleansing breeze
A phantom within reality
Golden threads are fraying
Freedom floods upon feathered wings
My soul is drifting away
Melancholy sweetness blooms
Like spicy fragrance from a rose
Lost within the silence am I
Yet somehow unafraid
The deepest comfort found in me
The binds have now broken
That once held me here
Like crystal sands
I slip through your fingers
And gently float away
Alone is how I choose to be
Gracing the lightly glittered sky
For all of time
Remember me, my cherished love,
For I live in you.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Lynn
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1 posted 10-03-1999 10:12 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Good Poem.....I really liked it.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel
Denise
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2 posted 10-03-1999 10:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautifully written, Krista!

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Denise
Dark Angel
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3 posted 10-04-1999 12:40 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Alwye, love this, nicely written

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Severn
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4 posted 10-04-1999 02:00 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Another free verse, I see - and another one well done!!
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


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Ditto the above!

Keep up the free verse please!
hoot_owl_rn
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Enchanting piece of work, nicely done!!

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
Sally S.
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7 posted 10-04-1999 10:18 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Beautiful and yet so sad. There seems to be so much of that in here as of late. I'm going to need to get to a "happy" forum... hmmmm...."Oh, Ron??!!"
Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Thank you all very much! Hmm, happy forum, eh? Sounds good to me!

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


passing shadows
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oh this is beautiful!
 
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