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One Tiny Tear

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Kitty**
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0 posted 10-03-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**


I've cried enough tears to fill an ocean,
over the loss, of all I hold dear.
But now, the tears have subsided, all
except one tiny tear.

Each time, I hear your name,
everytime time you cross my mind.
A tear will appear, as if on cue,
to remind me, of a bygone time.

So many thoughts, and feelings,
flows along with that tear.
All of my love, anguish and pain,
my wishes, dreams and my fears.

The warm salty taste on my lips,
reminds me, once more of your touch.
You gave me your love, then denied me,
and now I miss you so much.

Somethings, are never forgotten,
and I believe, that they shouldn't be.
For as long, as that tiny tear can fall,
you'll forever, still be with me.

We all have our friends, our loves, and such,
and hold on, to the things that are dear.
But you are my everything, rolled into one,
and that is in, my tiny tear.
© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 10-03-1999 09:20 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I know the feeling well, Kitty-some people will always stay with you, no matter what...You wrote it well. Good job!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Witch's Brat
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2 posted 10-03-1999 09:39 PM       View Profile for Witch's Brat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Witch's Brat

I ditto Lizzy's comment, Kitty**. Your poem is beautiful.

Witch's Brat
Denise
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3 posted 10-03-1999 10:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad and beautiful, Kitty.

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Denise
Alwye
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In the space between moments


4 posted 10-03-1999 10:20 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Sad and truly moving..

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


Pufalove
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5 posted 10-04-1999 05:54 AM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

Well, Ms. Kitty, you certainly can express yourself with poetry. This is sad, hits home, and is a keeper! Lovely.

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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 10-04-1999 08:34 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautifully written expressions of sadness, thanks for sharing

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
Kitty**
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7 posted 10-04-1999 08:43 AM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

Thank you all for your comments..
Sometimes it helps to *pour* out the saddness
so your heart has room for happiness.
I'm slowly making more room in my heart! ;-)
suthern
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8 posted 10-04-1999 09:24 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Well done, Kitty!
Blue Eyed Wanderer
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9 posted 10-04-1999 03:30 PM       View Profile for Blue Eyed Wanderer   Email Blue Eyed Wanderer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue Eyed Wanderer

Well done. I've been feeling the same lately, but I could have never said it as beautifully as you have. I loved it.
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 10-04-1999 08:10 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Our tears say so much yet so silently..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Kitty**
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11 posted 10-05-1999 02:25 PM       View Profile for Kitty**   Email Kitty**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kitty**'s Home Page   View IP for Kitty**

My sincere thanks to all of you that took
the time to read and respond to my poem..

It has been pure joy to be here and to have
the privilege to read some of the most beautiful poetry I have ever read..RIGHT HERE..in PASSIONS IN POETRY!!



[This message has been edited by Kitty** (edited 10-05-1999).]
LngJhnAg
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12 posted 10-05-1999 03:14 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

gee - I wonder how many tiny tears I live in? I know ol' Toerag has some for the way I outshine him. I know Balladeer has some for the way I allow Toerag to get the best of him. I know suthern has some for the way Toerag can never be as sweet as me. I know Rainbow Girl has some for the way I turned my rowboat around mid-Atlantic and headed for the Mississippi. But other than that, I wonder.....
miriam
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13 posted 10-10-1999 02:08 AM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

if only one tear would come out instead of a river everytime i heard his name i would be happy. do you mind if i print this out?
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


14 posted 10-10-1999 02:15 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Another cat!!!
Geesh! We're turning into a pound here!
LOL... just teasing Jitty, I love cats!
And this poem. Some people stick with you, as do some poems. This will be one!
MEGAN
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15 posted 10-10-1999 02:21 AM       View Profile for MEGAN   Email MEGAN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MEGAN

very moving poem.. i know exactly what u r going through.. it is when i write at times at these, with the motivation which that one tiny tear brings, i do my best work.. I love this poem.
Kelly
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16 posted 10-10-1999 02:10 PM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

This is very touching. I can really relate to it. You've expressed the feeling so well. Thanks.
passing shadows
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you are amazing
 
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