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Severn
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since 07-17-99
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0 posted 10-03-1999 08:53 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Severn

I heard your voice today
I caught your laugh
and imagined your throat
as it moved
I tasted your talk
and pretended you spoke
bright words beside me
a breeze kissed me
and I knew it was you
That cool wind in my hair?
It was only your fingers
I see the same shapes as you
the shapes of clouds
and souls
you are my mirror
I am your echo
and silences?
They say you are only sleeping
you are near

I heard your voice today
and I hear it now
quietly whispering in the air
one day
I will gently stroke
your throat and kiss the laughs
right out of you
one day
you will sleep in the silences
of my love...

3.9.99 KM
© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
PhaerieChild
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since 08-30-99
Posts 1829
Aloha, Oregon


1 posted 10-03-1999 08:59 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Severn,
This is beautifully romantic! I especially like the part "and kiss the laughs right out of you" Sounds so romantic and so fun as well.

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 10-03-1999 09:01 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Whoa...now Severn, you are definately echoing my thoughts with this one. We need to get together and talk sometime. Nicely done!!

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
Christopher
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since 08-02-99
Posts 9130
Purgatorial Incarceration


3 posted 10-03-1999 09:03 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

And since I must win, I tell you that I AM THE LUCKY ONE!
K- ever am I with you, always. Your words bring me that much closer and you know that I treasure each one, knowing that it was lovingly crafted by your hand.
And know that someday soon will be here before we realize it! (PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!)
Love Chris
Severn
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since 07-17-99
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4 posted 10-03-1999 09:10 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wildchild - it's going to be the most fun I've ever had!!!!

Hoot - I agree, talk to you when I can - as explained below.

Chris - I'm trying to e-mail you but as usual the networks are down!!!! I'll keep trying dear, grumble grumble, moan moan......
and you know these words can only be for you...
Alwye
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In the space between moments


5 posted 10-03-1999 10:35 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

So incredibly romantic....wonderful work!

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


RainbowGirl
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since 07-31-99
Posts 3167
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6 posted 10-04-1999 09:10 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Severn: I can imagine you both smiling..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Michael
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since 08-13-99
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7 posted 10-04-1999 09:14 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Jeeze I wish Femme would get back so I wouldn't be just a voyeur to all this love floating around here...sweet poem, severn, *deep sigh*.

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Michael Anderson

The coldest lies are often told in silence.


Sally S.
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since 06-07-99
Posts 887
Ohio


8 posted 10-04-1999 09:33 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Even me...a poet of "Rhyme", can truly appreciate the beauty of this romantic piece. Very nice.
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 07-17-99
Posts 8273


9 posted 10-04-1999 06:15 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Thankyou all so very much!!!!
's

Michael - don't worry, I'm sure it won't be for long!!!!

Sally - that is quite a compliment!!
Seaangel
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since 07-27-99
Posts 172
Auckland, New Zealand


10 posted 10-11-1999 08:49 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

Exactly what it feels like for everyone else, at least you know who and where that someone is!!
Skyfyre
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since 08-15-99
Posts 1966
Sitting in Michael's Lap


11 posted 10-12-1999 10:17 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

WOW ... this one gave me chills, Severn ... beautiful sentiments, beautifully written ... just exquisite!

Christopher, you are blessed ...

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Pepper
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since 08-19-99
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12 posted 10-12-1999 11:19 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Sigh....so beautiful Severn

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
 
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