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undying love

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miriam
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0 posted 10-03-1999 07:40 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for miriam

Your beautiful smile, gentle kiss and tender -heart,
Have not dissapeared forever. We will never fall apart,
In my heart we will always be together.

You might meet someone new,
She might seem like the one.
But soon she'll make you blue,
Know to me you can always run.

I've learned to look in your eyes,
I know when you've lied,
Or at night you've done nothing but cried.

You might not admit to this,
But I know you still love me.
I can tell by the way you kiss,
Someday together again we'll be.

When this day turns into night
I'll wish on my star,
That you could hold me tight,
And it'll reply you can't-you've gone far.

I don't know what else to say,
I just needed you to know I care.
For now I'll go away,
When you need me I'll be there.


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miriam coronado


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Severn
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1 posted 10-03-1999 08:47 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I hope this all sorts out for you Miriam...nice work.
Alwye
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2 posted 10-03-1999 10:38 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wonderfully done..I too hope that whatever is going on works out for you.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


Dark Angel
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3 posted 10-04-1999 12:30 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Miriam, this is lovley and sad, I too hope it all works out for you and you no longer have to feel the pain

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


miriam
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4 posted 10-04-1999 02:04 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

Severn, Alwye, Dark Angel...thank you.
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