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Confusion

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Lynn
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since 09-20-1999
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


0 posted 10-03-1999 06:41 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn


Confusion

He came to me on a
night filled with confusion.
He said he wanted and needed me
more than anything else.

But my heart was
with someone other than him.
I tried to explain how I felt,
but no words could express it.

I left him there,
in the coldness of a January night.
He wanted to follow me as I left,
but I made him promise not to.

Confusion still haunts me.
Did I make the right choice?
Was leaving him that night
the wisest thing to do?

For now, I'm alone.
No one to hold, simply
because I gave up the one who
loved me for the one who didn't.
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 10-03-1999 07:33 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very sad, but well written
Love is a two way street though, it never works if only one loves

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Denise
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2 posted 10-16-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad. Very well expressed.

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Denise
wannabe_poet
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since 10-15-1999
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Markham, Ontario, Canada


3 posted 10-18-1999 12:16 AM       View Profile for wannabe_poet   Email wannabe_poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wannabe_poet

Sad Indeed! Time heals all wounds I truly believe it eventhough time seems to stand still when you are hurting. Don't worry when you least expect it Mr.Right will come along.
Again it is the 'TIME' thing!

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