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RobertB
Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-10-03 05:23 PM


Rhymes are words and
words are riddles and
riddles are games that
children play when
the rain chases them
into the playground of
their imagination.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

© Copyright 1999 RobertB - All Rights Reserved
Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
1 posted 1999-10-03 05:59 PM


Robert,
At a glance, this was a playful piece, once
ingested...a deep thought. Well said.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-10-03 06:08 PM


Well done! And we children play in the Passions playground daily..

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


RobertB
Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
3 posted 1999-10-03 06:14 PM


YES!!! this is the most wonderful playground I have found.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

[This message has been edited by RobertB (edited 10-03-1999).]

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
4 posted 1999-10-03 07:10 PM


really liked this one, thanks for sharing
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-10-03 07:26 PM


Great, so few words, but so much said!!

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.

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