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Open Poetry #3

The Other Place

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

0 posted 1999-10-03 04:33 PM

Maybe once
we could fold into each other
and find another place
beyond what we are,
where there would be no measure
only melting.

I am one thought in time.
The sea does not feel
my toes dangling,
the sun moves always
into another daybreak,
the turning world
holds me to her
for reasons of her own.

That precious footprint
cannot sustain itself,
consumed by minutes
it is gone.

Maybe once
we could find another way
of knowing,
glimpse beyond
one separate thought
to that other place
where there would be not measure
only melting.

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

1 posted 1999-10-03 07:10 PM

This is outstanding, Martie

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-10-03 07:22 PM

EXCELLENT!!!!

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-10 04:17 PM

This is a wonderful piece of writing, Martie! Glad I found it!

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Denise

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 1999-10-10 06:50 PM

Martie,
Once again I enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-04 03:55 AM

maybe once

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-11-12 03:16 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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