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If you enter my heart...

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 10-03-1999 04:15 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

You will get my love and friendship
but you'll know right from the start
we'll be entering a partnership
no contract exchanged, just heart to heart

I'll try to make you laugh when you cry
I may disappear when you most need me
when you're angry I will even try to pacify
If you're ill I'll drive you mad with remedies

I'll listen and if you ask, my mind will leave no trace
You can rant and rave and take all the time that you need
or you can quietly say you need time and space
this love and friendship you can never exceed

I'll share all my troubles and happy times with you
cry on your shoulder and make you all soaking wet
I'll see your life and troubles from a different point of view
what's important to you I'll try not to forget

I'll do everything I can to make your life a happier one
As I take your hand in mine and it's sealed with our care
I promise to share my life with you as our lives turn by the sun
this love and friendship will always be ours to share.

For all those that enter my heart..

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-03-1999 04:22 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Rainbow! I enjoyed this!

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Denise
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 10-03-1999 04:29 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Sweetness personified are you oh beautiful rainbow!
It would indeed be better if people were themselves, instead of trying to be somthing else for another person!
Alwye
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3 posted 10-03-1999 04:31 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Exellent, I love the message, the amount of your heart that obivously went into this..awesome work!

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


Beki
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4 posted 10-03-1999 04:34 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

sweet promises...nicely said :-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
RainbowGirl
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5 posted 10-03-1999 05:15 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

dsnyder: Thank you..

HUGS

Christopher: Definitely not sweet, but definitely me!..

HUGS


Alwye: Yes, you're right, I was thinking of a way to clarify something earlier on this evening and went with my thoughts, seemed the best way..

HUGS

Beki: Well I hope I keep to my promises..

HUGS



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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Isis
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6 posted 10-03-1999 06:18 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautiful promises there RainbowGirl, and I know enough about you to know you'll do your damndest to keep them!!..:..

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Dark Angel
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7 posted 10-03-1999 06:23 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

RainbowGirl, this is really beautiful, well done !

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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8 posted 10-03-1999 07:05 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lovely poem, RG... well done!
RainbowGirl
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9 posted 10-03-1999 07:18 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Isis: Well, thankfully, it takes two to share and that's what happens when people care...

HUGS

DarkAngel: Thank you..

HUGS

Suthern: HUSG my friend

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 10-03-1999 07:38 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely done Rainbow
Julie
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11 posted 10-03-1999 07:47 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

That was beautiful Rainbow.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



miriam
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12 posted 10-03-1999 07:50 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

"make new friends but keep the old, those are silver these are gold...." love you.
Severn
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13 posted 10-03-1999 08:32 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hey Rainbow - this is bee-oot-iful!
And I like Chris think you definitely are a sweetie!
Saxoness
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14 posted 10-03-1999 09:09 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

this is from the heart..........which is the best sort of poem. well done.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


RainbowGirl
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15 posted 10-03-1999 09:27 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Hoot: thanks and good luck for the ticket purchase, I want a scan of this ticket..*g*..

HUGS

Julie: Thanks sweetheart..

HUGS

Miriam: all good things are made of gold..

HUGS

Severn: LOL...Go talk to your man..

HUGS

Saxoness: You're right Angel..

HUGS

I'm off to oblivion, thanks all for your laughter and your company..

Sweet dreams

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 10-03-1999).]
Poet deVine
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16 posted 10-03-1999 10:03 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

True friendship personified! Excellent!
JTF
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17 posted 10-04-1999 03:53 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

That's a perfect answer to the "who am I ?" challenge ... beautiful heart ... beautiful lady ...

HUSG
Pufalove
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18 posted 10-04-1999 05:12 AM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

Yes, it all starts with friendship, doesn't it. Nice read.

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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.

RainbowGirl
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19 posted 10-04-1999 09:08 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

PDV: Thank you..

HUSG

JTF: ooops, blushing here, thank you kind Sir..*g*

HUSG

Pufalove: Thank you..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Iloveit
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20 posted 10-04-1999 09:44 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

very beautiful, its nice to know what you want and expect and have to offer, and for it to all be seen as beautiful only makes it you!
Skyfyre
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21 posted 10-04-1999 05:28 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

!!

A *HUG* for one who has given so many ... this is the sweetest bit of verse I have seen in some time. Feels like a hug all in itself.

Nocht
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22 posted 10-04-1999 08:01 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Iloveit: LOL, nothing so rigid and I forgot to say I'm an impatient little so and so..<g>

HUSG

Nocht: Thanks for the HUG, needed that..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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23 posted 10-04-1999 08:40 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Rainbow, I'm sure a friendship "contract" with you would have no hidden "claws".
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