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Witch's Brat
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0 posted 10-03-1999 01:17 PM       View Profile for Witch's Brat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Witch's Brat

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Blue Eyed Wanderer
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1 posted 10-03-1999 01:47 PM       View Profile for Blue Eyed Wanderer   Email Blue Eyed Wanderer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Blue Eyed Wanderer

This was really good...it gave me goosebumps when i read it...great job!
JennyLee
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2 posted 10-03-1999 02:16 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

I thought this is a great read.
You write so well!

Jenny
Pepper
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3 posted 10-03-1999 02:31 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

my heart goes out to you WB.....you expressed your feelings in excellent form......Welcome to Passions......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Systematic Decay
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4 posted 10-03-1999 02:37 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

How sad, I can really identify with the "her" you mention in this poem.......
I hope if "she" is a real person, she can stop this behaviour, trust me, it will ruin her. She probably needs nothing more than a good friend to stop her.....

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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5 posted 10-03-1999 03:54 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

I am sooooo the girl in this poem... or at least i feel like her... very well put WB... thanx

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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--
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6 posted 10-03-1999 04:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done, WB!

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Denise
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7 posted 10-03-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for Witch's Brat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Witch's Brat

Thanks to all who replied to this one. I know the "she" in this poem has seen it...thanks again everybody.

Pepper-thanks for the welcome.

SD-so do I, and thanks

Witch's Brat

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