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Birth of the Immortal - The Beginning

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Elysium Moon
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0 posted 10-02-1999 06:34 PM       View Profile for Elysium Moon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elysium Moon

Celestial spirit of the night
Gliding into her loverís embrace
A moment stolen, a sweet touch
Then gone without a trace

Sweet smile of love she offers him
Her visage too beautiful to bear
But he cannot deny her
He longs to have her there

Tender words disarm him
As he smiles at her in delight
This ethereal lover seeking
Fulfillment from the night

She amazes him with her vigor
Her lust has no earthly restraint
She saps his very mortality
Until he realizes itís too late

The last night she seeks him out
She tells him of her wicked plan
She needed to produce a child
From the seed of an earthly man

Immortal was the name she used
Woman doomed to ever lust
Bound by a curse from ancient witch
Never to die and join the dust

She let him touch the belly
That held his unborn child
In a moment he saw her
Half human, an Immortal wild

In his mindís eye, she appeared;
So breathlessly magnificent
Dark green eyes, flaming hair
Her form meant for manís bedevilment

His woman child would live on
Forever, it has been decreed
And he a lowly mortal
Had provided the fertile seed

His lover turned to leave him
A smile of cunning in her eyes
He knew his death was required
For this mating compromise

The child, a girl, was born anon
As beautiful as had been foretold
And from the time of her birth
She upheld the Immortal code
© Copyright 1999 Elysium Moon - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 10-02-1999 08:19 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Wonderful installment to this myth you are writing. When shall we see the next one?

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Pepper
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2 posted 10-03-1999 12:39 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

exquisite....absolutely loved this piece EM.........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Nan
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3 posted 10-04-1999 07:14 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is quite an intriguing story, Ms Moon - and told beautifully as well..
bsquirrel
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4 posted 05-23-2002 02:32 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Always a pleasure, S, D or E.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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5 posted 11-28-2003 01:55 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ah...this was me? I abandoned all hope of having another alias here. Too confusing. It's hard enough keeping ME straight let alone a second persona. Just bringing this up for a friend to read.
 
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