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Hunger of the Immortal

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Elysium Moon
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0 posted 09-12-99 10:31 AM       View Profile for Elysium Moon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elysium Moon


Sitting astride her Stygian mount
wings curled at her side
riding faster through the glen
seeking vengeance for her pride
fiery blood flowing in her veins
the need is on her now
seeking mortal blood
to fulfill her virgin vow
thrusting forward in the seat
crazed with hunger’s desire
no man is safe from vixen’s touch
that ignites her wanton fire
© Copyright 1999 Elysium Moon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-16-99 09:21 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

"thrusting forward in the seat
crazed with hunger’s desire
no man is safe from vixen’s touch
that ignites her wanton fire"
Awesome imagery!


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2 posted 09-26-1999 07:43 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Wondrously done! The rhyme at the end adds a final punch to the piece.

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Purgatorial Incarceration


3 posted 09-26-1999 09:08 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

What else can I say, but that I really liked this!
Elysium Moon
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4 posted 10-02-1999 06:37 PM       View Profile for Elysium Moon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elysium Moon

I decided to put a beginning to the story. Please see Birth of the Immortal.

Thank you all for you kind words - this is a departure for me.
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5 posted 05-23-2002 02:31 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Ah remember this, too. An' ah still love i'.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

 
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