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Revenge of the Immortal |
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Elysium Moon New Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9 |
Silvery wings spreading wide she took her lover deep inside held him in her womanly vise till he surrendered to her ice Nymph of lambent ice so pure took a victim as her cure no mortal will she allow to be succor of her immortality cast aside he lay replete spells were given, now complete doomed to roam for eternity remembering her femininity |
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Miss Behavin' Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 84 |
Whoa - Such FanciFree..... Very lovely, E.Moon.....  |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
VERY nice! Enjoyed the read. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
kewl, very good.  ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Bravo!! This captured me totally !! MORE..... ------------------ Helewes |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
This is a wonderful series you are working on...it has me totally hooked..can't wait for more... "Silvery wings spreading wide she took her lover deep inside held him in her womanly vise till he surrendered to her ice" rhyme and meter perfect, imagery fresh and original..good stuff! :-) ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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loyd168282 Junior Member
since 1999-09-10
Posts 12lou,ky jefferson |
such a nice job!! it is so deep. thank you for posting that. Loyd, |
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Elysium Moon New Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9 |
I decided to write a beginning...See Birth of the Immortal... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hey, ah remember this! She said burn ... together. |
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