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Revenge of the Immortal

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Elysium Moon
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0 posted 08-30-99 12:24 AM       View Profile for Elysium Moon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elysium Moon


Silvery wings spreading wide
she took her lover deep inside
held him in her womanly vise
till he surrendered to her ice
Nymph of lambent ice so pure
took a victim as her cure
no mortal will she allow to be
succor of her immortality
cast aside he lay replete
spells were given, now complete
doomed to roam for eternity
remembering her femininity
© Copyright 1999 Elysium Moon - All Rights Reserved
Miss Behavin'
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1 posted 09-01-99 12:31 AM       View Profile for Miss Behavin'   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Behavin'

Whoa - Such FanciFree..... Very lovely, E.Moon.....
caroline
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2 posted 09-06-99 01:55 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

VERY nice! Enjoyed the read.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Saxoness
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3 posted 09-06-99 08:38 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

kewl, very good.



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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


JennyLee
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4 posted 09-08-99 03:07 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Bravo!! This captured me totally !!
MORE.....

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Helewes
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5 posted 09-16-99 09:22 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

This is a wonderful series you are working on...it has me totally hooked..can't wait for more...
"Silvery wings spreading wide
she took her lover deep inside
held him in her womanly vise
till he surrendered to her ice"
rhyme and meter perfect, imagery fresh and original..good stuff! :-)


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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
loyd168282
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6 posted 09-17-99 01:57 AM       View Profile for loyd168282   Email loyd168282   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for loyd168282

such a nice job!! it is so deep. thank you for posting that.


Loyd,
Elysium Moon
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7 posted 10-02-1999 06:35 PM       View Profile for Elysium Moon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elysium Moon

I decided to write a beginning...See Birth of the Immortal...
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8 posted 05-23-2002 02:31 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Hey, ah remember this!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

 
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