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Only In My Dreams

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Shar
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0 posted 09-15-99 08:58 PM       View Profile for Shar   Email Shar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shar

In the morning
before first light
though I sleep
my soul takes flight
on a journey
to an unknown land
free from prejudice
of man
Rainbows smile
warm and true
Bless the hills
in morning dew
Lilac fragrance
fills the air
Birds serenade
with voices fair
In the stream
the sunlight plays
teasing shadows
with it's rays
Lilies dance
upon this land
Mother nature
leads the band
Serenity
with all her charm
wraps you in
her soothing arms
But alas
my soul shall weep
as my body
wakes from sleep
This precious world
so it seems
only exists
within my dreams



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© Copyright 1999 Shar - All Rights Reserved
tori
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1 posted 10-01-1999 02:59 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Shar this was "Absolutely Beautiful". be proud of this one :-) I'm glad I found it...

I'm thinking......
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Dragoness
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2 posted 10-02-1999 03:33 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

If only in the real world there was such a place *SIGH* Lovely poem!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Denise
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3 posted 10-08-1999 09:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Shar, how did I miss this one? (ooops, I forgot I was away that week!) I'm glad I found this! Very well done!

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Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-09-1999 12:21 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely done...good imagery!!
Poet deVine
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5 posted 10-09-1999 07:04 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I'm glad someone pulled this to the top! It's a lovely poem.
DreamEvil
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6 posted 10-09-1999 07:08 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

'Tis a good verse indeed.

Shar? As in the Night Goddess?

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 10-09-1999 08:58 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Shar,
Agree with all the above. Good verse, well written, well done.
zipknee
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8 posted 10-09-1999 09:00 AM       View Profile for zipknee   Email zipknee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for zipknee

what a beautifully descriptive poem. i really like it.
Alwye
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9 posted 10-09-1999 11:48 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful...if only there was such a place..

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


Tara Simms
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10 posted 10-09-1999 11:57 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

If my dreams took me to a place such as you described, I may never wake. Sounds wonderful!

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
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Pepper
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11 posted 10-09-1999 11:57 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

wonderful visual...a beautiful poem Shar

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Kelly
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12 posted 10-10-1999 02:03 PM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Great job. Let's take it back to the top.
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