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rogen of the night
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0 posted 09-10-99 04:32 AM       View Profile for rogen of the night   Email rogen of the night   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rogen of the night

I've been stuck wondering through these pits darker then the midnight sky for what seems like a life time.Not turning to look back the way I came from because i can feel him coming for me apoaching closer & closer on his iron black horse.

As I turn a corner I can see the first signs of dawn aproaching from up above so close yet so far away.I can't help but to turn and look just once for I must see who this black knight is that hunts me like an animal.As I glance back I can see his eyes fool with rage growing darker in his eyes for he wants me but can not catch me.

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The wise man is the storm prays God,not for safety from danger,but for deliverance from fear.It is the storm within which endangers him,not the storm without.
~~Ralh Waldo Emerson~~
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1 posted 10-04-1999 01:09 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

I really like this.
I had to look over my shoulder! well done.

Jenny
rogen of the night
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2 posted 10-05-1999 04:31 AM       View Profile for rogen of the night   Email rogen of the night   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rogen of the night

Thank you jenny I wasn't sure if anyone would respond to this poem or not its not that good or atleast i didn't think so.I came up with it real fast one night while at work and wrote it down.

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The wise man is the storm prays God,not for safety from danger,but for deliverance from fear.It is the storm within which endangers him,not the storm without.
~~Ralh Waldo Emerson~~
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3 posted 10-05-1999 10:02 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Well done...nothing like a Black Knight following you to keep the others night demons away.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

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