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Black Knight |
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rogen of the night Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 29 |
I've been stuck wondering through these pits darker then the midnight sky for what seems like a life time.Not turning to look back the way I came from because i can feel him coming for me apoaching closer & closer on his iron black horse. As I turn a corner I can see the first signs of dawn aproaching from up above so close yet so far away.I can't help but to turn and look just once for I must see who this black knight is that hunts me like an animal.As I glance back I can see his eyes fool with rage growing darker in his eyes for he wants me but can not catch me. ------------------ The wise man is the storm prays God,not for safety from danger,but for deliverance from fear.It is the storm within which endangers him,not the storm without. ~~Ralh Waldo Emerson~~ |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I really like this. I had to look over my shoulder! well done. Jenny |
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rogen of the night Junior Member
since 1999-09-07
Posts 29 |
Thank you jenny I wasn't sure if anyone would respond to this poem or not its not that good or atleast i didn't think so.I came up with it real fast one night while at work and wrote it down. ------------------ The wise man is the storm prays God,not for safety from danger,but for deliverance from fear.It is the storm within which endangers him,not the storm without. ~~Ralh Waldo Emerson~~ |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Well done...nothing like a Black Knight following you to keep the others night demons away. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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