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Three Moons of Mur

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Poet deVine
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Another challenge phrase from a friend: Write a poem using "the three moons of Mur"


Luminescent white orbs glowing
shining on black water flowing
taking time to reach the sea
slowing moving outwardly.

Green shadows on the waterís edge
natureís moving night time hedge
moon glow bright as days first light
Mur is lovely in itís night.


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How lovely - envisioning the moonlight shining on the sea - Very nice, deVine...
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Very very beautiful, Ms. deVine..

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OOOOh, I really really liked this...."black waters & green shadows" made this a hit with me!! I'm big on GOOD words....

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Is there no end to your talent ms deVine?
I swear I'm going to burst with envy!

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I thought this was worthy to be brought back...I missed it the first time around....I love the imagery...and the nightime magic this portrays! Very lovely indeed ! ***curtsies

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Wow! I missed it, too, and it is very, very beautiful.
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PDV: Fabulous!

HUGS

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WOW! Loved this!

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Stunning!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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PDV..how well you stood up to the challange, this is a most beautiful piece of writing
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Thank you all for your kind comments! I am a bit surprised this got resurrected! I didn't consider it worthy, only posted at a time when the brain wouldn't get into gear. I do so appreciate your words though! Thanks.
 
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