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Echo Rhayne
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0 posted 10-03-1999 03:39 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

If I could...
I would cry all your tears;
feel your hurt, fight your fears:
...because I adore you!
If I could...
I would rearrange the universe;
and put all your heart desires first:
....because I need you!
If I could...
I would make happiness your personal slave;
and bring joy into your saddest days:
...because I miss you!
If I could...
I would write your name with the stars above;
so that the world could see, it's you I love:
...because I want you!
If I could...
There wouldn't be nothing I wouldn't do;
to simply show I love you:
...because I do!


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~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~
© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
Pufalove
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1 posted 10-03-1999 06:08 AM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

Pretty powerful, this love thing.......so is your poem!
U K Hero
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2 posted 10-03-1999 07:41 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Devotion is what I see here (wish I could be your man), and devotion seems to be missing in today’s world well penned Echo.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 10-03-1999 09:22 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Absolutely beautiful Echo.....you've read my thoughts with this piece. Thanks for sharing
Pepper
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4 posted 10-03-1999 11:19 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

a beautiful read Echo

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Poet deVine
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5 posted 10-03-1999 11:49 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wonderful lines here, Echo! If everyone could only be so loving, the world would be perfect!
Echo Rhayne
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6 posted 10-03-1999 03:21 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thank you all for your so kind comments on this poem. If only the person it was written for cared, ya know? Oh well *sigh* Someone does, and that is enough, for now


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~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~
Systematic Decay
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7 posted 10-03-1999 03:34 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Great poem.....I dont know what else to say.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


8 posted 10-03-1999 03:34 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Great poem.....I dont know what else to say.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Denise
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9 posted 10-03-1999 03:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful and well constructed. It's great to have you back!!

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Denise
Watcher666
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10 posted 10-29-1999 01:12 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful verse.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Echo Rhayne
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11 posted 10-29-1999 01:17 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Talk about diggin up old poems LoL...Where did you find this one Watcher? Thanks for reading and replying!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

Isis
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12 posted 10-29-1999 02:04 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beauitful verse and thoughts, if only more people saw the light.

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


devina
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13 posted 10-29-1999 02:36 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

IF ONLY MORE COULD LOVE AS HARD AS YOU...I REALLY ENJOYED THIS ONE!
Michael
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14 posted 10-29-1999 02:58 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Very sweet, Echo. Beautiful poem.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?


Echo Rhayne
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15 posted 10-29-1999 04:04 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Isis...Thank you kindly. Yes you are right, if only more people saw the light...*sigh*

Devina...Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

Michael... Thank you kindly!



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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

WhtDove
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16 posted 10-29-1999 08:08 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This was from the heart! Couldn't have said it better myself! Terrific Echo!
hoot_owl_rn
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17 posted 10-29-1999 12:10 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

sweet
Echo Rhayne
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18 posted 10-29-1999 01:10 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Rebecca...Thank you kindly!

Ruth...Thanks again


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

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