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Reverie

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caroline
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0 posted 10-03-1999 02:10 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for caroline

Reverie


I sit high upon a star
Dream about you from afar
Hold my breath in wait
and try to contemplate
what our lives could be
if you were here with me…

We'd dance along the moonbeams
Sleep in heaven's sweet dreams
Sparkle in the sun's rays
Kiss the dawning of a new day

Each night would hold a fresh surprise
We'd walk where destiny resides
Paint delight with colored rainbows
Inhale peace each time the wind blows

In every sound we would rejoice
Love is spoken with one voice
We would sing it through the skies
A joyful noise that never dies

We'd know that when two lovers meet
Two hearts belong to just one beat
We'd see through each other's eyes
to find the truth that fear denies

I sit high upon a star
and wonder where you are…


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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
© Copyright 1999 Caroline - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 10-03-1999 02:21 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

That one voice is truly a choir to my heart and soul.
Wonderful verse my dear.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

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2 posted 10-03-1999 02:49 AM       View Profile for Buzzygirl   Email Buzzygirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Buzzygirl

Very nice! It really speaks of longing and love... well done!
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 10-03-1999 09:27 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Can I ever relate here caroline, well written, a lovely poem full of longing and love.

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.
Pepper
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4 posted 10-03-1999 10:52 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I enjoyed this piece much Caroline....lovely read

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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5 posted 10-03-1999 04:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another lovley one, Caroline!

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Denise
caroline
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6 posted 10-03-1999 06:53 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Thank you everyone
Maybe my writer's block is finally starting to fade ~*LOL*~

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
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7 posted 11-25-1999 06:33 PM       View Profile for el_nino2005   Email el_nino2005   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for el_nino2005

Good one! -Guess who
(I'll give you a clue: You went to my dad's mom's on Thanksgiving)
caroline
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8 posted 11-26-1999 03:45 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

You must be mistaken. I did not go to anyone's mother's home for Thanksgiving...in fact, I was traveling.

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Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog


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9 posted 12-12-1999 12:47 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Caroline, I can relate to this, it's so beautiful. Well Done!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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