How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #3 Archive
 Autumnal Fire
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Autumnal Fire ( Villanelle #2 )

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Dr.Moose1
Member Elite
since 09-05-99
Posts 3505
Bewilderment , USA


0 posted 10-02-1999 08:57 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Autumnal fire , vibrance a-blaze
Infusions bright , command our gaze
Inflamed desire , for longer days

At dawns first light , through star-lit maze
Our sky-bound choir , wafts from the haze
Autumnal fire , vibrance a-blaze

Heights to aspire , fewer our stays
never to tire , o'er fields of maize
Inflamed desire , for longer days

Higher , higher , determined ways
O'er ville and shire , o'er bogs and brays
Autumnal fire , vibrance a-blaze

Some will expire , broken as clays
Yet still we choir , our voices raised
Inflamed desire , for longer days

Azure , sapphire , sun's slanted rays
To raise our choir , we must obey
Autumnal fire , vibrance a-blaze
Inflamed desire , for longer days


© Copyright 1999 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


1 posted 10-02-1999 09:04 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another excellent piece!

------------------
Denise
Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 09-15-99
Posts 1312
That place with padded walls a


2 posted 10-02-1999 09:31 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Wow, I thought that was amazing.

------------------
"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Dr.Moose1
Member Elite
since 09-05-99
Posts 3505
Bewilderment , USA


3 posted 10-02-1999 09:52 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

dsnyder, Systematic,
Thanks for the reviews , maybe I should change my name to Dr. Goose ?
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 10-02-1999 10:01 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Excellent!!
caroline
Senior Member
since 08-16-99
Posts 1251
http://members.xoom.com/bellad


5 posted 10-02-1999 10:24 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Applause! (just don't change it to Dr. Suess. That one is taken, I think! ~*LOL*~)

Great work Doc

------------------
The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 07-07-99
Posts 32119
Tamarac Fla


6 posted 10-03-1999 09:41 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dr.Moose1,
You did very well, the villanelle form has stomped many a good poet. Well done.
Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 06-16-99
Posts 3968
In the space between moments


7 posted 10-03-1999 10:31 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful work!! Autumn truly is inspirational, don't you think?

------------------
*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #3 >> Autumnal Fire Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors