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The Garden of Your Soul
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The Garden of Your Soul |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I enter the garden of your soul Reach for your hand there a rose, so fragrant, is tucked in the wildness of my flowing hair You lead me to the center where a small pond reflects in blue myriad colors of flowers as I lay down there with you A bird sings in far off distance In the water, a fish splashes in glee we lay with only our breath between us our love, our passion free In your garden I have found a love so peaceful and sublime never leaving, I give myself to you now and for all time. |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
How romantic....much like your other one. I enjoy reading all your work. SIGH...! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Gentle and romantic. Very nice indeed!  What's with the gardening lately Devine? hehe |
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Kelly Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145 |
Ahhh I love it. It's very beautiful. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I smile a wistful smile in response... <----wistful smile! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful!! I don't think there's any other word to discribe this, absolutely beautiful |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
took my breath away PdV.....and I echo Hoot......absolutely beautiful ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Applause, PDV... this is lovely! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Elegantly divine, DeVine one. ------------------ Michael Anderson I could not love except where Death Was mingling his with Beauty's breath - Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny Were stalking between her and me. EAP |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Tranquility itself.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I find this full of devotional love...really good one ! Jenny |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I really liked this poem, it gave me a sense of peace and love just to read it, and I think we all need that once in a while, to escape the turmoil of the real world into our own quiet world full of love. Lol, I think even my pet bird can sense the feeling I have right now, she's making her kissy noises and saying "I love you." ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- [This message has been edited by Systematic Decay (edited 10-03-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So romantic! I enjoyed this very much! ------------------ Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
mmmmmmm I am all jelly inside after that one. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
What better way is there to get a Tranquil soul than that! Beautiful!! ------------------ What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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