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The Garden of Your Soul

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Poet deVine
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0 posted 10-02-1999 12:09 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet deVine


I enter the garden
of your soul
Reach for your hand there
a rose, so fragrant,
is tucked
in the wildness of
my flowing hair

You lead me to the center
where a small pond
reflects in blue
myriad colors of flowers
as I lay down
there with you

A bird sings in far off distance
In the water,
a fish splashes in glee
we lay with only our breath between us
our love, our passion
free

In your garden I have found
a love so peaceful and sublime
never leaving,
I give myself
to you now
and for all time.
© Copyright 1999 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Pufalove
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1 posted 10-02-1999 12:41 PM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

How romantic....much like your other one. I enjoy reading all your work. SIGH...!
WhtDove
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2 posted 10-02-1999 01:10 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Gentle and romantic. Very nice indeed! What's with the gardening lately Devine? hehe
Kelly
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3 posted 10-02-1999 01:14 PM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Ahhh I love it. It's very beautiful.
Christopher
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4 posted 10-02-1999 01:22 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

I smile a wistful smile in response...
<----wistful smile!
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-02-1999 01:23 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful!! I don't think there's any other word to discribe this, absolutely beautiful
Pepper
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took my breath away PdV.....and I echo Hoot......absolutely beautiful

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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7 posted 10-02-1999 01:51 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Applause, PDV... this is lovely!
Michael
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8 posted 10-02-1999 01:59 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Elegantly divine, DeVine one.

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Michael Anderson

I could not love except where Death
Was mingling his with Beauty's breath -
Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny
Were stalking between her and me.
EAP



RainbowGirl
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9 posted 10-03-1999 01:23 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Tranquility itself..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

JennyLee
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10 posted 10-03-1999 02:25 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

I find this full of devotional love...really good one !

Jenny
Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


11 posted 10-03-1999 02:31 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

I really liked this poem, it gave me a sense of peace and love just to read it, and I think we all need that once in a while, to escape the turmoil of the real world into our own quiet world full of love.

Lol, I think even my pet bird can sense the feeling I have right now, she's making her kissy noises and saying "I love you."

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-


[This message has been edited by Systematic Decay (edited 10-03-1999).]
Denise
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12 posted 10-03-1999 03:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So romantic! I enjoyed this very much!

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Denise
RobertB
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13 posted 10-03-1999 05:31 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

mmmmmmm I am all jelly inside after that one.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Isis
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14 posted 10-03-1999 06:05 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

What better way is there to get a Tranquil soul than that! Beautiful!!

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

 
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