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Nurse Crachet
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since 1999-09-27
Posts 318
They know where I am!

0 posted 1999-10-02 11:33 AM


Passions Herds vs Written Herds

Crawling halls
bugs infest
bowling balls
pins detest

Windows cracked
dampness seeping
kindness lacked
sanity creeping

Hidden closets
fears dwelling
literary deposits
brains swelling

Written words
meanings expressed
passions herds
formally impressed
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Written Herds

Crawling balls
bugs detest
bowling halls
pins infest

Windows lacked
dampness creeping
kindness cracked
sanity seeping

Hidden deposits
fears swelling
literary closets
brains dwelling

Written herds
meanings impressed
passions words
formally expressed

Thought this was kind of interesting.



[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 10-02-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved
Justin Thyme
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since 1999-09-13
Posts 216
Oz
1 posted 1999-10-04 08:22 PM


You're NUTS just like the rest of us, Ratchet.... better watch out!!!! mwahahahaha

Didn't know you could write like this. Been taking lessons from ONE FLEW?

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-10-04 11:29 PM


I like this one! This was neat.
Nurse Crachet
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since 1999-09-27
Posts 318
They know where I am!
3 posted 1999-10-06 04:56 PM


Justin Thyme, go back to your rubber room, and give me that darn laptop that unknown poet managed to sneak into you. I'm still hunting him down, this place is just to busy.

WhtDove, Thank-you for reading, and responding. After I posted it I started playing with it, and that's how the (or) came to be. Glad you liked it.

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
4 posted 1999-10-06 06:26 PM


Nurse Crachet....you can give me a lobotomy anytime.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Vincent VanGogh
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since 1999-10-05
Posts 9
somewhere in France or Italy (me thinks)
5 posted 1999-10-06 06:47 PM


Well far be it from me to offer my two cents, but someone here REALLY needs a vacation. Hey, Cratchet, Pablo stole all the ping pong balls from the Req Room and we all herds you ain't doing nothin' about it - what's up with that...

Written herds,
Thoughtless words.
Pasion's herds,
For the birds.

"Tis ashame -
Rubber walls,
Ain't the same -
Without ping pong balls!



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Vinny

Only someone I held true and dear,
Would I ever lend an ear.


sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
6 posted 1999-10-06 07:30 PM


What a picture that one paints!
ONE FLEW OVER
Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 55
Cuckoos Nest
7 posted 1999-10-06 07:59 PM


Now how did I get involved in this Justin Thyme? What's she trying to write anyway? She sounds further over then me, I need to get my hands on a printer so I can have proof about this, then I'll have my walking papers, no more flying for me!

It's a small world after all.

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
8 posted 1999-10-06 08:13 PM


HEY! Careful with that "bugs infest" jive! Not while I'm on the scene!.....signed..Truly Swollen

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
9 posted 1999-10-06 08:58 PM


My daughter likes to squash bugs, can she come and play. Just ask Sir Balladeer about all the bugs in OP#1. Interesting stuff her Nurse.
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