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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 10-02-1999 11:33 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Passions Herds vs Written Herds

Crawling halls
bugs infest
bowling balls
pins detest

Windows cracked
dampness seeping
kindness lacked
sanity creeping

Hidden closets
fears dwelling
literary deposits
brains swelling

Written words
meanings expressed
passions herds
formally impressed
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Written Herds

Crawling balls
bugs detest
bowling halls
pins infest

Windows lacked
dampness creeping
kindness cracked
sanity seeping

Hidden deposits
fears swelling
literary closets
brains dwelling

Written herds
meanings impressed
passions words
formally expressed

Thought this was kind of interesting.



[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 10-02-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved
Justin Thyme
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since 09-13-99
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1 posted 10-04-1999 08:22 PM       View Profile for Justin Thyme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Thyme

You're NUTS just like the rest of us, Ratchet.... better watch out!!!! mwahahahaha

Didn't know you could write like this. Been taking lessons from ONE FLEW?
WhtDove
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2 posted 10-04-1999 11:29 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I like this one! This was neat.
Nurse Crachet
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3 posted 10-06-1999 04:56 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Justin Thyme, go back to your rubber room, and give me that darn laptop that unknown poet managed to sneak into you. I'm still hunting him down, this place is just to busy.

WhtDove, Thank-you for reading, and responding. After I posted it I started playing with it, and that's how the (or) came to be. Glad you liked it.
RobertB
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since 09-26-1999
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4 posted 10-06-1999 06:26 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Nurse Crachet....you can give me a lobotomy anytime.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Vincent VanGogh
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since 10-05-1999
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somewhere in France or Italy


5 posted 10-06-1999 06:47 PM       View Profile for Vincent VanGogh   Email Vincent VanGogh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Vincent VanGogh

Well far be it from me to offer my two cents, but someone here REALLY needs a vacation. Hey, Cratchet, Pablo stole all the ping pong balls from the Req Room and we all herds you ain't doing nothin' about it - what's up with that...

Written herds,
Thoughtless words.
Pasion's herds,
For the birds.

"Tis ashame -
Rubber walls,
Ain't the same -
Without ping pong balls!



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Vinny

Only someone I held true and dear,
Would I ever lend an ear.

sandgrain
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since 09-21-1999
Posts 3657
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6 posted 10-06-1999 07:30 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

What a picture that one paints!
ONE FLEW OVER
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since 09-18-99
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7 posted 10-06-1999 07:59 PM       View Profile for ONE FLEW OVER   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ONE FLEW OVER

Now how did I get involved in this Justin Thyme? What's she trying to write anyway? She sounds further over then me, I need to get my hands on a printer so I can have proof about this, then I'll have my walking papers, no more flying for me!

It's a small world after all.
Balladeer
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8 posted 10-06-1999 08:13 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

HEY! Careful with that "bugs infest" jive! Not while I'm on the scene!.....signed..Truly Swollen
Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
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Redlands,CA,USA


9 posted 10-06-1999 08:58 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

My daughter likes to squash bugs, can she come and play. Just ask Sir Balladeer about all the bugs in OP#1. Interesting stuff her Nurse.
 
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