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Just Hold On Michael

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Lucie
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0 posted 10-02-1999 11:02 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

Sheíll be back, she will! I know!
Deep in my heart it tells me so.
Do not fret my gentle friend
a love like yours just shouldnít end.

Iíll write to her and ask her why
if she is gone where was goodbye?
Iím sure that she will soon return
through my letter, of your hurt, sheíll learn.

And I will tell her its not fair
to treat you like she doesnít care.
For I have emails that Iíve saved
that do not mirror how sheís behaved.

She claimed she loved you once or twice
and the way sheís treating you isnít nice.
To make you sit with constant pain
no word from her makes you insane.

Iíll send the emails I have read
Iíll hold her to the things she said.
So please hold on a little while
Iíll try to comfort you with smiles.




[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 10-02-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 10-02-1999 11:36 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like the poem Lucie and I like that you care enought to want to help Michael out. We do not know all the details here, but I'm sure there is a reason for what's happening.. sometimes people do things they think are best for everyone. Again, you did an excellent job here - and I like all the happy faces!
Nurse Crachet
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2 posted 10-02-1999 11:37 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Lucie how sweet of you to write to cheer, the smiles I'm sure will reach the miles, as your kindness shines as bright as the sun.
Lucie
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3 posted 10-02-1999 11:39 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Pufalove
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4 posted 10-02-1999 12:29 PM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

So you want to fix the world? You could, too! Got a good start with cute one. Made me smile!!!!!!!!!
Christopher
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5 posted 10-02-1999 01:31 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher


Too sweet!


I'll add a few of my own!
Michael
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6 posted 10-02-1999 02:04 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Thanks Lucie,
A few smiles make all the difference in the world. Thank you too Devine and chris.

------------------
Michael Anderson

I could not love except where Death
Was mingling his with Beauty's breath -
Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny
Were stalking between her and me.
EAP



WhtDove
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7 posted 11-07-1999 01:09 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Hmmn, don't know how I missed this one! But anyway it is so sweet it has to back to the top!
Munda
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8 posted 11-07-1999 03:15 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

You're so sweet Lucie. : )
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9 posted 11-07-1999 03:50 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I have been dealing with my own issues, but still do I want you to hold on my friend.

Thank you Lucie for this verse.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

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10 posted 04-25-2004 08:46 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

couldn't do this now...we are only allowed 5 smilies
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