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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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0 posted 1999-10-02 11:02 AM


She’ll be back, she will! I know!
Deep in my heart it tells me so.
Do not fret my gentle friend
a love like yours just shouldn’t end.

I’ll write to her and ask her why
if she is gone where was goodbye?
I’m sure that she will soon return
through my letter, of your hurt, she’ll learn.

And I will tell her its not fair
to treat you like she doesn’t care.
For I have emails that I’ve saved
that do not mirror how she’s behaved.

She claimed she loved you once or twice
and the way she’s treating you isn’t nice.
To make you sit with constant pain
no word from her makes you insane.

I’ll send the emails I have read
I’ll hold her to the things she said.
So please hold on a little while
I’ll try to comfort you with smiles.




[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 10-02-1999).]

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-10-02 11:36 AM


I like the poem Lucie and I like that you care enought to want to help Michael out. We do not know all the details here, but I'm sure there is a reason for what's happening.. sometimes people do things they think are best for everyone. Again, you did an excellent job here - and I like all the happy faces!

Nurse Crachet
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since 1999-09-27
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2 posted 1999-10-02 11:37 AM


Lucie how sweet of you to write to cheer, the smiles I'm sure will reach the miles, as your kindness shines as bright as the sun.
Lucie
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3 posted 1999-10-02 11:39 AM



Pufalove
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4 posted 1999-10-02 12:29 PM


So you want to fix the world? You could, too! Got a good start with cute one. Made me smile!!!!!!!!!
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 1999-10-02 01:31 PM



Too sweet!


I'll add a few of my own!

Michael
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6 posted 1999-10-02 02:04 PM


Thanks Lucie,
A few smiles make all the difference in the world. Thank you too Devine and chris.

------------------
Michael Anderson

I could not love except where Death
Was mingling his with Beauty's breath -
Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny
Were stalking between her and me.
EAP




WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
7 posted 1999-11-07 01:09 AM


Hmmn, don't know how I missed this one! But anyway it is so sweet it has to back to the top!
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands
8 posted 1999-11-07 03:15 AM


You're so sweet Lucie. : )
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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9 posted 1999-11-07 03:50 AM


I have been dealing with my own issues, but still do I want you to hold on my friend.

Thank you Lucie for this verse.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
10 posted 2004-04-25 08:46 PM


couldn't do this now...we are only allowed 5 smilies
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