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Love at first sight

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luckygirl
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0 posted 10-02-1999 09:39 AM       View Profile for luckygirl   Email luckygirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for luckygirl

I smiled, and blushed
He came over, I began to feel flushed
I took a deep breath, he was coming nearer
It was love at first sight, I swear

I tried to look away but my eyes were glued
They were glued to this incredible human being - this gorgeous guy
He ran his fingers through his hair, I began to stare
It was love at first sight, I swear

I took a step back to admire this man,
Trying not to stare too much, but it was impossible
I smiled again, and moved uneasily
As he came over and stuck his arm out

He reached out and placed his hand on my shoulder, smiled at me then said "excuse me miss, you're standing infront of my locker"
I flinched at myself, then ran..why doesn't love at first sight happen to me?

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desperado
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1 posted 10-03-1999 02:15 PM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for desperado

hehe ahh the school girl mentality in wonderful exhibit. great ending, although I'm not sure whether you wanted it to rhyme or not all the way through. it was a little disjunctured in the rhyme department and rhythm was also a little erratic at times. other than that though I'm surprised that it got this far without someone else posting. keep it up.
Pepper
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2 posted 10-03-1999 02:35 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

very cute......enjoyed the read luckygirl......

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3 posted 10-03-1999 04:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Surprise ending! I liked that! Don't feel alone luckygirl! We've all been there! (I think!)

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