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Mrs.Bigglesworth
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0 posted 10-02-1999 08:48 AM       View Profile for Mrs.Bigglesworth   Email Mrs.Bigglesworth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mrs.Bigglesworth

Shopping trolly.
It used to be at the front,
The leader of the pack.
Now it stands there lonely,
Right at the very back

The one which people push aside,
As if it's no big deal.
Nobody wants to use it now,
The one with the squeeky wheel.

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*jess*
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Mrs.Bigglesworth
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1 posted 10-02-1999 09:01 AM       View Profile for Mrs.Bigglesworth   Email Mrs.Bigglesworth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mrs.Bigglesworth

this is the author of the poem.
Just to say thank you for taking the time to read my poem.

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*jess*
Poet deVine
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2 posted 10-02-1999 09:30 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! This is a cute poem - but I always get this one..it has a mind of it's own too, taking me down that dreaded ice cream aisle!
U K Hero
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3 posted 10-02-1999 10:10 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Thank you Mrs Bigglesworth, this was a most enjoyable read.
Pufalove
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4 posted 10-02-1999 12:51 PM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

I catch your double meaning in this. Much like the cart, we tend to forget the Senior persons and they are "pushed aside". We must remember, we will be there all too soon!
You have said a lot in such a short space. Nicely written.
Kelly
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5 posted 10-02-1999 01:10 PM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

I like it. It's very thoughtful and well written.
The Unknown Poet
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6 posted 10-02-1999 02:06 PM       View Profile for The Unknown Poet   Email The Unknown Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Unknown Poet

Very well said. hey, weren't you my third grade teacher???

the unknown
Denise
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7 posted 10-04-1999 10:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This made me smile!

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Denise
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8 posted 10-05-1999 09:06 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Mrs. B: welcome aboard, and thank you for sharing your insightfullness. We hope you come to read our poems as we read yours.

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Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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