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Another Guy Stole My Man

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Lorelei
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0 posted 10-02-1999 05:41 AM       View Profile for Lorelei   Email Lorelei   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lorelei's Home Page   View IP for Lorelei


I cling to a past that won't
set me free,
and they tell me tomorrow is another day.
But how can I go on when you kept me all
this time, and turned on me this way?

I know I spent all my free time trying
to hold on so that you might stay.
When all you ever wanted to do was get
yours and make me go my own way.

My heart and my feelings were shattered.
I new it was coming, but why today?
You could have picked a better time
than this, our wedding day.

Supposed to be the happiest moment of my life...
What did you expect me to say?
That I don't mind, but you could've picked
a better time to tell me you were gay.


~I was given the boot about 6 hours ago, and he couldn't even tell me. He had his sister tell me he was breaking up with me. The nerve! Anyone have any bitter women poems? If so, send them to me, my addy is ossa_rave@hotmail.com
© Copyright 1999 Lorelei - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 10-02-1999 05:56 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

All my hugs dear Lady. My own sister went through this, but she caught them in the act. I feel for you. Tell me what you require in a poem and you will have bitterness customed made for you.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Lorelei
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2 posted 10-02-1999 06:29 AM       View Profile for Lorelei   Email Lorelei   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lorelei's Home Page   View IP for Lorelei

I require a poem that has an anti-men slogan at least one time. I seem to be going around in circles. The same thing happened to me this time last year, dumped for someone else... I think I'll savor this self-pity. Not too often you come upon an excuse for it...
DreamEvil
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3 posted 10-02-1999 06:34 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

'Twill be done by tomorrow and in your e-mail.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Dragoness
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4 posted 10-02-1999 07:25 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

So sorry *Hugs*

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Christopher
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5 posted 10-02-1999 01:36 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Ditto the *hugs*


oh, and PS- If you want bitterness, you've certainly caught the attention of the right poet! LOL DE!

[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 10-02-1999).]
Pepper
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6 posted 10-02-1999 01:53 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

my heart goes out to you Lorelei.....many HUGS sent your way

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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on the threshold of a dream


7 posted 10-02-1999 02:14 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I sincerely hope you recover your heart soon and find someone not only worthy of your love by willing to return it.

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 10-02-1999).]
Lorelei
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8 posted 10-02-1999 06:48 PM       View Profile for Lorelei   Email Lorelei   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lorelei's Home Page   View IP for Lorelei

Thank you all, I have been to hell and back tonight. (especially since I know he is with another woman right now) He left me because he made plans with her to go over her house this weekend, and i would've never known unless my friend told me he was going. He thought I wouldn't believe her, but I do. He's never told me the truth. And as to him leaving me for another man, it's not true, but he is gay, he's just "in the closet," but I feel leaving me for another woman is worse. I mean what does she have that I don't? What do alot women have but not me? Self-esteem? But if these girls are with him, it's cause they can't find a good man, and are settling for someone who will treat them like dirt. He had the chance at me, and he lost it. My wonderful self will go elsewhere. Well, maybe I'm not wonderful, but nobody's perfect.
WhtDove
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9 posted 10-02-1999 07:47 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Lorelei sorry to hear that. But if he treats them like dirt, than you're better off without him. May someone who will treat well and respectful take his place. I like your attitude there. Good way to look at it!
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10 posted 10-02-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Death to him-or is it too good for the guy?

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Lorelei
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11 posted 10-03-1999 01:21 PM       View Profile for Lorelei   Email Lorelei   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lorelei's Home Page   View IP for Lorelei

Thank you, all. I think I would rather see him suffer. Maybe one day, he'll look in the mirror and see that he's not as perfect as he thinks and that he has hurt me, when he always said he never wanted to hurt anyone. But death would be too good for him. I am a firm believer in the three-fold law, and boy, will he get it back.

[This message has been edited by Lorelei (edited 10-03-1999).]
Elizabeth
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12 posted 10-03-1999 01:24 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

You go, woman!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

Julie
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since 08-20-99
Posts 742
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13 posted 10-04-1999 04:54 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

I always say...what comes 'round goes 'round.
find peace in that.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



Andrew Scott
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14 posted 10-04-1999 05:51 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Do not fret... Karma will find him in her sights. Sounds like he is unable to be true to himself... and until such time he'll never be true to anyone else. You're lucky to have found out now rather than several years down the road. Sorry for the pain of today, just don't let in jade you to a bitter end. As for the poem... really liked the first stanza.
Systematic Decay
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since 09-15-99
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That place with padded walls a


15 posted 10-04-1999 11:48 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

So Sorry to hear thwe situation. perhaps one day, fate will arrange a revenge for him......perhaops when he is outr of the closet, one of his boyfriends will leave him for a woman
Seriously though I think we are all meant for something, and this is fate's way of saying you are not meant for him.


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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
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