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That was then....this is now!!!!

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Justbleu
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0 posted 10-02-1999 02:44 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

The promise
Betraying one
The one is myself
The happiness
The joy
The tears one has cried
The hurt and the pain
All up inside
I took all of what I loved
The love I found
Praying that somehow, some way
This can be healed
Trusting in God to help me
Help me to find what lies beneath
Retreating into my shell
I don't want to go there again
The love I found that drew me out
I can't lose it now
I do not know the words
These words just touch barely the surface
Of what I feel and what I have to say
I want so badly to give what is locked up inside
Hidden away in the back of the mind
Tucked away where one can't find
Chaotic, abstract
These things I feel and see
Only I understand, sense, and perceive
These wonderful things tied up in me
I can barely explain
One was so close, but now far away
Second guessing all of my dreams
Everything that I love
EVerything that I still hold true
I stomped on them ever so hard
Hurting
Pain
No one grasps this pain I feel
The regret
The dream
The hope


I am free to let go
No judgemnet my way
All the pain it flew away
Far away
Things have settled
Heart calmed
No longer there to hurt me
Not me hurting myself
As I once had thought
Lies caused confusion
Self protection locked me up
Not my imagination
Intuition, the vibes
Caused pain from the other
Mind clear
Heart at peace
Comfortable
Free


Bridgette


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Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."


[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 10-10-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
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1 posted 10-02-1999 03:37 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Justblue...I could feel the anguish of your pain in this piece.........good work.....also I love your signature...did you write it?

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Dragoness
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2 posted 10-02-1999 03:50 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Confused and torn,ripping yourself up,I could feel and remember all of these emotions in this piem.Nicely done.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Justbleu
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3 posted 10-02-1999 11:29 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You both!!

Pepper, no I can't take the credit for that wonderful quote!! It is my favorite!!

Bridgette
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4 posted 10-10-1999 04:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so beautiful, Bridgette! I enjoyed this!

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Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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