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Open Poetry #3

An Unguided Love

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

0 posted 1999-10-02 01:15 AM

An Unguided Love

I wander through the dark
Trying to make a spark
That may turn into a fire
A Desire
For someone
That will come into my life
And make it worthwhile

She has come
And quick as a flash
Stole my heart
But it longed for another
One that was everything that I ever dreamed.

But both have a place in my heart
I can’t choose one without my world falling apart.
But I was too quick.
And didn’t follow my heart

The one that I long
Is like a beautiful song
She is always on my mind
And I wish that I had taken the time
To realize that you are my one, my dream

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

1 posted 1999-10-02 01:22 AM

Please write and post your comments on my poem. Thank you. ConderE

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-10-02 01:26 AM

Nicely said, why do we always seem to realize what we had after we've lost it?

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

3 posted 1999-10-02 01:37 AM

very nice ConderE.....thank you for sharing.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

4 posted 1999-10-02 02:29 AM

Thank you for the comments.

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