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What Makes You Think?

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Lucie
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0 posted 10-02-1999 12:25 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

What makes you think you are the best, the proverbial bag of chips?
You make me sick with all the lies that pass between your lips.
You said you were the one for me.. like you are all there is.
And just because he isnít here doesnít mean that Iím not his.

Iím married.. donít you get it.. honey you donít turn me on.
Many men just like you have been here, but now their gone.
When I stood up and took those vows I meant just what I said.
And believe me there is more to life then what you find in bed.

You swear a woman can not live without the touch of man
well I am here to tell you dear youíve met the one who can.
I do not need a man to make me feel like Iím complete.
And I also do not feel the need to sleep with all I meet.

I have many male friends whom have never seen my bed
and sweetheart you wonít either so just get it through your head.
Men like you are a dime a dozen and all your lines are played.
So move along my brother.. cause your not gettin laid.
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 10-02-1999 12:31 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well Lucie, you probably just broke the hearts of half the men in the forum *hehe*...great poem anyway.

Michael

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Balladeer
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2 posted 10-02-1999 12:48 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

It doesn't get said any straighter than that, Lucie. Beats the hell out of "I have a headache" for sure. Nobody can lay down the law better then you, girl...and it is very well written.
Lucie
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3 posted 10-02-1999 12:50 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I doubt that Michael.. everyone is in love with someone in here..heheh

Ha Ha Balladeer, after two years I don't think I'll ever have another headache for the rest of life..


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Pepper
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4 posted 10-02-1999 01:09 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

you go girl....Bravo!!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Lucie
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5 posted 10-02-1999 01:20 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Dragoness
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6 posted 10-02-1999 04:10 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

BRAVO!!!!!!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Pufalove
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7 posted 10-02-1999 04:57 AM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

Dropped that hammer again, didn't ya! Ha...I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nan
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8 posted 10-03-1999 04:20 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You Go Lucie... For Your Eyes ONLY

(Just because most of the rest have read it already - don't want to bore you.. )


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Julie
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9 posted 10-03-1999 08:04 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Ditto!

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



Lucie
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10 posted 10-03-1999 10:26 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Thanks for the great replies..

And thanks for the link Nan.. hadn't seen it before..
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11 posted 04-17-2004 05:17 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

hehehe...I need to send this to a few of my male aquaintences
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