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A Rose in The Garden (please Read...comments Welcome)

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A Romantic Heart
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0 posted 10-01-1999 10:33 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart


Who outshined all the other flowers in th

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© Copyright 1999 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-01-1999 11:27 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Oh, wow, Romantic Heart! This is just so powerful-all the way through, but especially the last few lines. Beautiful.

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"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."

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this is very touching, especially if your heart has been broken lately. Beautiful work.
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3 posted 10-02-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thanks for your comments Elizabeth and tocute4u! Yes my heart has been broken
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4 posted 10-03-1999 03:09 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I am sorry if I offended anyone by putting please read on my poem! I was going to enter it in a contest and needed responses to see if It was good enough...thisis the only poem I had put this title(Please Read)...sorry..and also I just get into a poetic mood to write and reading others poems on here inspires the flow of creativity...so If I have posted too many poems...I am sorry! I was just going with the flow! I am new at this! Please forgive me!
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 10-03-1999 06:59 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is truly very deep. I sympathize whole-heartedly. I think you should enter this in the contest, it is great!!

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6 posted 10-03-1999 07:28 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Wonderful, it brought a tear to my eye.
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yes I too think you should enter this piece......it is a winner......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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8 posted 10-04-1999 02:26 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thanks for the support and for the advice, Now That great poets have viewed it I feel at ease to enter it! Thanks you guys!
 
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