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Lost Without You

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


0 posted 10-01-1999 08:34 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Days pass,
Time slowly ticks by,
and I find myself...
Lost without you.
Lonliness and sorrow,
tears run down my face,
and the sky is blue,
and I find myself...
lost without you.
A memory or few,
of love kissed by the dew,
and I find myself...
Lost without you.
Without you,
there is no joy, no happiness,
or even sorrow...A part of me has gone away,
never to stay forevermore.
and I go day to day hungry for your love,
love that you gave me before,
I search,
but cannot find the other part of my heart.
For my soul cries out it's lonely plea,
only death will set us free...and I find myself....
Lost without you!
© Copyright 1999 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
RobertB
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1 posted 10-01-1999 08:51 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

I know the "lost" feeling too well.

RB

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Pufalove
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2 posted 10-01-1999 09:20 PM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

Like a deep, empty gap and nothing can fill it. I could barely breathe when I read it. What does that tell you about your poem!
Denise
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3 posted 10-01-1999 09:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very touching.

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Denise
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


4 posted 10-01-1999 09:29 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful! There seems to be a trend here lately - sad love poems that make me cry! I'm going to have to stock up on tissues!
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 10-01-1999 11:07 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Well done!!

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


6 posted 10-02-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thank you! At least I have friends here!
Pepper
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7 posted 10-03-1999 01:28 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

the feeling of deep loss is definetly felt by the reader in your excellent piece RH.....I enjoy your work much

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


8 posted 10-03-1999 01:50 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thanks pepper for the beautiful compliment!
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 10-03-1999 02:21 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Romantic,
It's temporary believe me. Enjoyed the read.
JennyLee
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10 posted 10-03-1999 02:22 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

This left me longing for one I miss terribly!
Beautiful !!

Jenny
Justbleu
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11 posted 12-04-2001 01:20 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I'm digging in the archives.......I think I know that feeling all too well.  

Lots of hidden treasures in these pages of days and weeks gone past.  It's hard to believe how long it's been!!!!

Take Care,
Bridgette  
 
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