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A Romantic Heart
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0 posted 10-01-1999 08:09 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart

once asleep,
I awoke to find,
that I had feel asleep
and lost track of time,
You came to me through the darkness of the night,
I could see your eyes glowing as a light.
Your breath warmed my face,
Your touch took me far away from this place.
Am I dreaming? are you real? Is this you that I feel?
I have longed to hold you, to kiss your face,
to be held by your embrace.
Softly you kissed me, I felt your lips slowly touching mine,
Awakened by a dream,
Frozen somewhere in time.
If only I could hold you again,
and show you how I feel,
this fantasy would disappear,
and become real.
© Copyright 1999 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 10-01-1999 08:13 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

a lost love...........too bad wisdom often comes in hindsight.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 10-01-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Yes it was a lost love...Through death...I often think of him.
Denise
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3 posted 10-01-1999 08:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Simply beautiful.

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Denise
A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 10-01-1999 08:24 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thanks Denise! This one was a bit hard to write . He was the same age as I and died a year after graduation. So many times I think about him...he was a poet also.
Serain
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5 posted 10-30-1999 10:01 PM       View Profile for Serain   Email Serain   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Serain

very sad im sorry
very good
thank you
caroline
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6 posted 10-30-1999 10:23 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I am very sorry for the loss of your friend, RH. You have penned a lovely poem in his honor. ((Hugs))

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

hoot_owl_rn
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I really liked this one
Justina
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8 posted 10-31-1999 11:14 PM       View Profile for Justina   Email Justina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justina

I like this! I, in a way, feel you. =)!
Watcher666
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9 posted 11-02-1999 03:29 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

So Lovely!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
 
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