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mia
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0 posted 10-01-1999 07:46 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mia

It was wonderful
like a dream
never to be interupted
by the reality of life
I lived in a bubble
surviving on your love
and you remain
after all this time
in love with me
you laid naked last night
on my bed
the only light
was that of a fading flame
burning between us
you smiled
and I fell on top of you
it was not to say goodbye
it was to say
again...
after all this time
we hang on
to the thought of us
forever
it will happen...
I will live to love you more
I will not let my life go
it will always be us
simply
hard...
© Copyright 1999 mia - All Rights Reserved
mia
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1 posted 10-01-1999 08:07 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

I would really love some comments on this one...It's my first since my last...which was a very long time ago... Before I lost my words

m
Pepper
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2 posted 10-02-1999 10:59 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I liked this read mia.....will be looking for more of your work

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3 posted 10-03-1999 12:09 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Powerful...I enjoyed this.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 10-03-1999 02:08 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Mia,
You didn't lose your words I found every one on the page. Enjoyed.
Denise
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5 posted 10-10-1999 05:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ditto! Very lovely, Mia!

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Denise
RobertB
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6 posted 10-10-1999 06:31 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

it was very nice mia.....why...how did you lose your words????

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Tara Simms
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7 posted 10-10-1999 11:09 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

I love this Mia, very soft and beautiful.
Watcher666
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8 posted 10-13-1999 07:56 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Lovely Dear Lady.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
 
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