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mia
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 118


0 posted 1999-10-01 07:38 PM


silence
everything has changed
since I was here last
before it went dark...
before I died.

Love was poison for me
and it ran through my veins
blinding me
forgetting me
you are the one
I will love forever
until tomorrow
when they drug me
to make me forget
where I am
away from you
my love

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-10-01 08:01 PM


Well done..but sad....

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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2 posted 1999-10-01 08:13 PM


Very very sad.

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-10-01 11:39 PM


Well done!
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
4 posted 1999-10-02 12:55 PM


Wow, deeply sad. Wonderfully done.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



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