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Two Little Flowers

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U K Hero
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since 08-08-99
Posts 271
England


0 posted 10-01-1999 06:51 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for U K Hero

Two Little Flowers

(Its long so, If you dont have time to read it, dont.)

Down in the meadow
O’er yon hill
To the left of the wood
And next to the mill,
Two little flower's hands held high
Two little flowers in want they cry,
“Where is yellow where is gold”
Poor little petals
All shrivelled and cold;
Down in the meadow
Next to the mill
They spied there one- eyed
On hilltop_ still,
The glowing eye its rays beseech
A call to all to test their reach.

One little flower
All petaled in blue
Did chat to other of what to do,
“Align with me-
We’ll catch the bright,
Together our petals, in chase of light.”
The other little flower
All petaled in red
Uprooted herself from shadowy bed,
And so together-
With Petals in hand
They skipped away to a brighter land.

They ran to the wood
Away from the mill
Down to the meadow and up the hill,
Two little flowers
On hilltop sighed
To see in distance they’re golden eyed,
It was on the horizon
Gently leaning,
O’ dear…
They missed their chance
Of warmth and feeling.

On hilltop bare
They shed a dew
From petals red and petals blue,
To miss their eye
It was a shame
But not for trying, or wanting the same,
Two little souls
A sorrowful sight
Alone on the hill in the darkest of night.

Two little souls
On hilltop bare
Gazed at new light shining there,
It was not as bright
But somehow nice
To see a face on that cold night_ and then,
By chance, a comet bright
Did mark its name in passing flight,
Two little souls were held in ore
To see its flurry
In heavens soar,
Both agreed
To stay a while
And watch in wonder, this heavenly smile.

For on that hill
They spied a light
And then another they twinkled bright
In fact, the night was full of wonder,
A dog a bear
A thingamabob too,
Knowing not constellations, they named a few
To add a touch of romance and flair
A chorus of crickets did serenade the pair;
Two new lovers
One red one blue
Did swap their petals
In love, 'Tis true.

Many days
And starry nights
Were spent on hilltop there,
And if perchance
You find romance
In sharing moonlight air,
Then mind your step
For you’ll regret
To step on flowers there,
For every hill
In every land
Has flowers on hilltops bare…

…………………………


Down in the meadow
O’er yon hill
To the left of the wood
And next to the mill,
Two little flower's hands held high
Two little flowers, no want no cry,
Yes, they’ve found the answer
No chasing light, just cuddle together,
Sometimes blue
And sometimes red
Content they lay
In there flowery bed,
But when it’s dark, on that hill, at night,
They petal together
In romantic light…


U K Hero.
© Copyright 1999 Ulysses Hero - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 09-06-99
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1 posted 10-01-1999 06:55 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Absolutely love this UK!!!...:..

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Pufalove
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since 08-18-99
Posts 120
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2 posted 10-01-1999 09:07 PM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

This is exceptional! I just want to read it over and over. It is such a beautiful love story. Thank you. Wow!
caroline
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since 08-16-99
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3 posted 10-01-1999 09:26 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Long? I don't think so...and it is time well spent in reading it. I loved it!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
U K Hero
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since 08-08-99
Posts 271
England


4 posted 10-02-1999 05:32 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Thank you poeteers, I have to say I was deeply concerned that it would not be enjoyed by readers within the forum. Your comments are inspiring thank you.
Dragoness
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since 08-07-99
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5 posted 10-02-1999 07:28 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Just beautiful! Thank-You!

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Sunshine
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6 posted 10-02-1999 09:41 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

What, no purple prodigy from the passion of blue and red? [Joke {~,^}] Very different, and enjoyable reading. Thanks, UK!
Pepper
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since 08-19-99
Posts 3134
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7 posted 10-02-1999 11:38 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

exceptional this is U K........love it........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Poet deVine
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8 posted 10-02-1999 11:41 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely poem! I like the image of those two little flowers in love on that hill! I'm going to look for them!
Deb Lynne
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since 08-19-99
Posts 181
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9 posted 10-02-1999 11:51 AM       View Profile for Deb Lynne   Email Deb Lynne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deb Lynne

This one makes you want to fall in love.... over and over and over.
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