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Lost Desire

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toocute4u_27
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Holdenville, OK USA


0 posted 10-01-1999 06:08 PM       View Profile for toocute4u_27   Email toocute4u_27   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit toocute4u_27's Home Page   View IP for toocute4u_27

Slowly I slip away from life
With each day I grow more distance
Seems harder to distinguish reality from a dream
I can feel the life draining from within
I have no desire to stop it
For I lost my desire the day I lost you

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KJS
© Copyright 1999 Kerrie - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 10-01-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Well written and oh so sad

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
toocute4u_27
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2 posted 10-01-1999 06:34 PM       View Profile for toocute4u_27   Email toocute4u_27   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit toocute4u_27's Home Page   View IP for toocute4u_27

thank you for your reply.
Isis
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3 posted 10-01-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

A powerful piece for one so short and sad...

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Denise
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4 posted 10-04-1999 09:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad. Very well written.

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Denise
suicidal dreams
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since 09-28-1999
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5 posted 10-04-1999 09:40 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

I like this alot sounds like me a little but then again were all different please keep posting.

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life is short kill quick
passing shadows
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6 posted 04-17-2004 05:06 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I know what you mean
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