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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 10-01-1999 04:34 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Arms entwine
Eyes lock
Music plays
Bodies rock
Clothes loosed
Bare skin
Whispered words
Passions within
Lips touch
Loves high
Hands search
Breathless sigh
Hips meet
Time flies
Two, one
Dreams realized

To Tyson, my love and my inspiration

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 10-01-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 10-01-1999 04:38 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Hoot: 'You lucky devils' springs to mind..*g*

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

suthern
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2 posted 10-01-1999 04:40 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I don't know about a title, Hoot... maybe you should just post a warning to take a deep breath cuz you're gonna lose the ability to breathe for a few moments. *G* Well done!
RainbowGirl
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3 posted 10-01-1999 04:42 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Suthern: I see our minds are on the same track...LOL

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 10-01-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Smiles..thanks Rainbow, was thinking the same myself

Suthern...what a compliment, thank you much!!

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 10-01-1999 04:49 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This is great! I don't know if the two of you can get through this month, I know were all gonna be in for some grand poetry as each day draws closer.
Sunshine
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6 posted 10-01-1999 04:49 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Warning...Passions Within

works for me!

Good job, Hoot
Balladeer
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7 posted 10-01-1999 05:19 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Great, hoot. I like "Encounter in Three Quarter Time" but what do I know?


That Tyson better not be a chicken!
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 10-01-1999 06:49 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Dreamer....it's going to be a long month I think

Sunshine...thanks

Balladeer, thanks and a very nice suggestion, really like it

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
Dark Angel
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9 posted 10-01-1999 06:55 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

PHEW! Hoot, this is great,I agree with Suthern. definatley post a warning Well Done !
A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 10-01-1999 07:02 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

How about "ENTAGLED BY LOVES'PASSION"
just a suggestion! Love the passion expressed here!
Pufalove
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11 posted 10-01-1999 07:09 PM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

This one knocks your lights out just thinkin'
bout it! How about "Chemical Vibrations"
That says alot about your message..Cool!
hoot_owl_rn
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Dark Angel, Romantic Heart and Puffalove, thank you all three for your kind words and suggestions

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
Pepper
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13 posted 10-02-1999 02:25 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

WOW Hoot.....WHEW......I have a suggestion for your title...how about "Loves High"

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
hoot_owl_rn
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Pepper.....that's kind of funny, because I was thinking "High On Love'...thanks
johnt300
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15 posted 10-02-1999 03:05 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Ruth,
WOW! So few words yet so exciting. How do you do it. Always waiting for more.
Tyson.
chanelle
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16 posted 10-02-1999 12:11 PM       View Profile for chanelle   Email chanelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chanelle

Lots of sensuality in this poem Hoot. Maybe you could call it " A second...An eternity"
hoot_owl_rn
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17 posted 10-02-1999 01:22 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Tyson...it's quite easy with you as an inspiration

chanelle...thanks, nice sugestion
Christopher
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18 posted 10-02-1999 01:26 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Hey ruth, I have an idea for the title. How about-
"I'm jealous because you get to meet yours before I get to meet mine."

Or is that a little too long??? LOL

Well done and I agree with suthern about the loss of bresth. Very powerful collection of words here!
You need a disclaimer for those with asthma!
LOL

Chris
fatwah
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19 posted 11-08-1999 06:49 AM       View Profile for fatwah   Email fatwah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fatwah

sunshine,
i was actually searchng for one of your poems which michael tells me i spoke ill of. i ws glad to find this one, this is what i look to find. i love the rhyme, the stubbed and short lines i dig your grooves
fatwah
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20 posted 11-08-1999 06:51 AM       View Profile for fatwah   Email fatwah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fatwah

sorry hoot, mistook you for sunshine. i dig your grooves
Toerag
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21 posted 11-08-1999 07:14 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Nicely done Hoot.....Why don't ya name it..
"Dreaming of Tai-Bo"?.....
Moonshine
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22 posted 11-08-1999 08:37 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Wow Hoot,

What an awesome poem - I could almost feel the heat of the passion through the computer screen. I thought of a possible title, though it may seem strange I think it suits it. How about:

Electric Tempest
Watcher666
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23 posted 11-08-1999 10:51 AM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Wow! Loved this Hoot!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Sally S.
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24 posted 11-08-1999 11:19 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Whew! Ya..I think it's steamy, girl!

Ok..ok..a title is what you're searching for, I see. How about....

Passion's Symphony
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