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Blue Eyed Wanderer
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0 posted 1999-10-01 03:13 PM


I follow their every word.
I do everything they say.
With all the medications,
I shouldn't feel this way.

They don't know what is wrong;
After all the tests they should.
They don't know what I feel like.
They've never understood.

I need something for the pain;
It's too much for me to bare.
But they never listen;
It's like they just don't care.

I don't know how much longer
I can hold on and fight.
I know I can't give up,
But you never know; I might.

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Anytime you try to win everything, you must be willing to lose everything. -Larry Csonka

*~Jessica~*

© Copyright 1999 Jessica Sousa - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 1999-10-01 03:16 PM


I can relate to this... how I've come to detest the phrase "pain management." *G* I don't WANT to manage it, I want to wave bye-bye as it disappears! LOL. Hang in there... your poem is great!
Elizabeth
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2 posted 1999-10-01 03:18 PM


I know the feeling, having experienced it in many different ways...hang in there.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

"Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..."


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3 posted 1999-10-01 05:38 PM


Blue eyed people don't give up. We're fighters. Hang tough, OK?
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 1999-10-01 06:10 PM


I have been there....about 8 years ago I was having migranes so bad I couldn't get out of bed, couldn't stand light or sound, couldn't eat or drink. I was hospitalized several times, had numerous tests done, CT scans, MRIs, X-rays, Arteriograms, and spinal taps only to have them tell me they couldn't find a thing and if I wanted they could order a psyc consult. Thanks, but no thanks!! After months of suffering, it finally went away.
You wrote your feelings well on this one

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 1999-10-27 04:34 PM


Im undigging poems LoL...I like this Jess, and I can definitely relate, but you can hold on a LOT longer and fight. You're right you can't give up, and you wont! You better not!!! I'll kick your butt if you do LoL *huggles*


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-10-27 06:39 PM


Blue, never give up. My thoughts and prayers are with you
Blue Eyed Wanderer
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7 posted 1999-10-27 10:51 PM


Ok, I don't know why I didn't even thank all you guys for commenting on this the first time around. I guess I'm just slow. LoL.
suthern~~> Thanks a lot, and I know just what you mean on that one.
Elizabeth~~> I'm trying. Thanks a bunch!
Baladeer~~> I'm not givin up anymore! Us blue eyed people are tough, and I plan on keeping it that way...lol. Thanks )
Hoot~~> I'm still hoping mine will just go away like magic too...poof! Well, I can dream, but I'm still stuck with whatever it is...grrrrrr. Thank you!
Echo~~> Oh no! Not my cute little tushy! LoL. I really need more sleep, can you tell? Thanks a lot hun! *hugs*
~Jess~

Watcher666
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8 posted 1999-10-28 12:38 PM


Awww my heart goes out to you! *hugs*. Well done verse!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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