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Open Poetry #3

One second of Bliss

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-10-01 11:45 AM

somewhere
somehow
i would be with you
if just dreams came true
if i was sane
handsome not vain
its obvious i know
but i'd give my life
if that was so
just for that moment
that one second
of bliss
then i could die happy
not knowing just madness..

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-10-01 06:18 PM

I'll take a bit more than one second thank you

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 1999-10-01 06:25 PM

hey Jackal, I like this alot,I know how you feel, but I'd prefer more than just a second as well.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 1999-10-01 07:03 PM

I know what you're saying too, but wouldn't one night of bliss be better??

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 1999-10-01 07:19 PM

I have often said within my heart, that to see the love of my life for just one moment in time , than to have never met them or even have seen them ...would be worth two seconds....or one glance! I feel the same way!

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