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Just Like You

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Lost Dreamer
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since 06-20-99
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Normal, Illinois


0 posted 10-01-1999 08:12 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Just Like You

Tear stained faces
as destinies woe
takes aim
accidentally.
Shattering innocent
dreams instantly
that once
were to be
future.

Take us far
expose your plan
explain
the pain away.
Cross over
see my world
know I'm just
like you.

Walk with me,
talk with me,
hold me
in your arms.
Never let me
faulter
while evil
forces attempt
pounding
at my door.
© Copyright 1999 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
johnt300
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since 09-12-99
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1 posted 10-01-1999 08:17 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Liked this one a lot. Thanks for sharing it. Have a good one.
Tyson
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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Illinois


2 posted 10-01-1999 08:32 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Hope they quite pounding at your door soon. I like this one!
Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 10-01-1999 08:39 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

johnt300: Thank you very much.

WhtDove: I wrote this for a friend who's daughter just had a miscarriage. I felt really sad for them. Glad you liked it.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 10-01-1999 11:16 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely done

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Pepper
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5 posted 10-02-1999 03:06 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

very good piece Lost Dreamer.....enjoyed the read

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