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Under the Night Sky with You

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johnt300
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0 posted 10-01-1999 06:18 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for johnt300

Fresh sunfish by the lake,
Mosquitos having there way.

After supper,
A long, barefoot walk
Down dry, dirt roads
Winding naturally with the land.

Our sun,
Fallen from view,
As the rising full moon
Assumes her duties,
Keeping watch over us all.

Late night skinny dipping with mother natures care,
Serene body of water
All to ourselves,
By the midnight stroke.

Fish brush by our legs,
A failed bite at our feet,
Exploring curiosity.

We dry by the others warmth,
Rolling feverishly,
Loudly under the stars,
And awaking nothing,
Save the passions refining our souls.



[This message has been edited by johnt300 (edited 10-01-1999).]
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Sally S.
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1 posted 10-01-1999 09:21 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Well, the imagery was wonderful. I could see perfectly the entire setting.
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 10-01-1999 09:33 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Tyson...I can't wait for this to happen as well as all the other little things life has to offer us.
I love this line:"We dry by the others warmth" "very nicely said. This is a well written piece packed full of lovely imagery. I can see it when I read it and so want to share it with you. Love has no bounds Tyson, I believe in us.

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

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Dragoness
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3 posted 10-01-1999 09:51 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Sounds like you've already been to this place..well done.

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JennyLee
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4 posted 10-01-1999 10:11 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Beautiful...a walk worth taking !

Jenny
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5 posted 10-01-1999 04:46 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I have to say this, you two have sure got some energy...*g*...isn't love wonderful, glad you two found each other..

HUGS both

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

johnt300
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6 posted 10-02-1999 03:11 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Sally S., glad you could see it...

Hoot, I sure hope this does happen. Waiting is very difficult. Hope to see you.

Dragoness, I have not but hope to be, soon. And thank you.

JennyLee, Thank you!

Rainbow, I am glad, too. Thank you.

Tyson
Pepper
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7 posted 10-02-1999 03:22 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

oh so romantic Tyson....what a perfect night you have written.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Pepper
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8 posted 10-02-1999 03:23 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

oh so romantic Tyson....what a perfect
night you have written.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
johnt300
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9 posted 10-02-1999 06:21 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Thank you Pepper,
I appreciate your replies immensely.
Tyson
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