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Convict

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suicidal dreams
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since 09-28-1999
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0 posted 09-29-1999 07:56 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suicidal dreams

I am jailed before i am realized.

I am condemned before my side is revealed.

I am hated by the jailers, who are my peers.

I am Dead before they even try to understand.

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life is short kill quick
© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 09-29-1999 08:26 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow....this was deep. I really enjoyed it

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
suicidal dreams
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2 posted 09-29-1999 08:29 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

Thxs i appriciate the reply.
suicidal dreams
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3 posted 09-29-1999 08:30 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

Thxs i appriciate the reply.
Systematic Decay
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That place with padded walls a


4 posted 09-30-1999 03:02 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Great poem Tom. A little hint....don't push the submit button twice.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Isis
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5 posted 09-30-1999 03:32 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Heavy as usual, but great job!

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


Dragoness
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6 posted 09-30-1999 07:28 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

THis one made me think.Well done.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
suicidal dreams
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7 posted 10-02-1999 03:17 AM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

thinking is good

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life is short kill quick
 
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