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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
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Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-09-29 07:56 PM


I am jailed before i am realized.

I am condemned before my side is revealed.

I am hated by the jailers, who are my peers.

I am Dead before they even try to understand.

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life is short kill quick

© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-29 08:26 PM


Wow....this was deep. I really enjoyed it

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
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2 posted 1999-09-29 08:29 PM


Thxs i appriciate the reply.
suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
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3 posted 1999-09-29 08:30 PM


Thxs i appriciate the reply.
Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
4 posted 1999-09-30 03:02 AM


Great poem Tom. A little hint....don't push the submit button twice.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-09-30 03:32 AM


Heavy as usual, but great job!

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)



Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

6 posted 1999-09-30 07:28 AM


THis one made me think.Well done.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
7 posted 1999-10-02 03:17 AM


thinking is good

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life is short kill quick

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