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Whispers |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Whispers Listen to the softness of a whisper ~ cushioned by your lips, close to my ear. Ecstacy fills my heart, rising it high on my mind, blanketing all other thoughts. Trees bending slightly under the push from the breath of a pagen god of long ago... it too whispers to me... but not the same words. For does a wisp of breeze have a meaning for I? The faded smell of lost perfume and roses still lingers silently. The whisper is still there, as are memories you’ve given me. The wonderment of you never ceases, can’t die, always lives. Whisper once more words that will not stay, but silently be remembered like a pagan god’s. After that, my love, Goodnight. Circa 1969 ©KRJ 29 September, 1999 ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-30-1999).] |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This likes me  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Absolutely beautiful sunshine!! "Listen to the softness of a whisper ~ cushioned by your lips, close to my ear." Wonderful imagery ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Just want to say it rang my bell. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Caroline, Hoot and Sy, for letting me know your thoughts on this. This one has liked me too, for a long, long time. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Reflections of memories.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
lovely Sunshine.... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Sunshine!! A precious whisper of a memory from your past!! ------------------ What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rainbow, Pepper, Isis, thank you all for reading and sharing your thoughts. Whispers can be quite loud at times... |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
This speaks to me, albeit quietly. Well written. Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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