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Sunshine
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0 posted 09-29-1999 07:37 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Whispers

Listen to the softness of a whisper ~
cushioned by your lips,
close to my ear.

Ecstacy fills my heart,
rising it high on my mind,
blanketing all other thoughts.

Trees bending slightly under the push
from the breath of a pagen god of long ago...
it too whispers to me...
but not the same words.

For does a wisp of breeze
have a meaning for I?

The faded smell of lost perfume and roses
still lingers silently.

The whisper is still there, as are memories
youíve given me. The wonderment of you
never ceases, canít die, always lives.

Whisper once more words that will not stay,
but silently be remembered
like a pagan godís.

After that,
my love,
Goodnight.

Circa 1969

©KRJ
29 September, 1999


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Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-30-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 09-29-1999 07:54 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This likes me

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
hoot_owl_rn
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Absolutely beautiful sunshine!!
"Listen to the softness of a whisper ~
cushioned by your lips,
close to my ear."
Wonderful imagery



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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-29-1999 08:59 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine,
Just want to say it rang my bell.
Sunshine
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4 posted 09-30-1999 09:23 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Thank you Caroline, Hoot and Sy, for letting me know your thoughts on this. This one has liked me too, for a long, long time.
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5 posted 10-03-1999 04:51 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Reflections of memories..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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lovely Sunshine....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Isis
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7 posted 10-03-1999 06:20 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautiful Sunshine!! A precious whisper of a memory from your past!!

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

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Rainbow, Pepper, Isis, thank you all for reading and sharing your thoughts. Whispers can be quite loud at times...
Skyfyre
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9 posted 10-04-1999 05:33 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

This speaks to me, albeit quietly. Well written.

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


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