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Echo Rhayne
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0 posted 09-30-1999 06:32 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I walked among the fallen leaves,
and felt your hand in mine;
I turned to speak and naught was there,
but gnarled trees entwined.

I sat along the winter's beach,
and heard your steps near me,
when I looked up to see your face,
a gull flew out to sea.

Among the flowers in springtime green,
I sat in mild repose.
You touched my cheek, I reached for you,
and found my brightest rose.

In summer's shade my thoughts go back;
thru' mounded years they send,
my memories to the time I found
a new and loving friend.


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~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~
© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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1 posted 09-30-1999 06:52 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautiful Echo, just beautiful..

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What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us.
~Isis~

Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 09-30-1999 07:34 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thank you Isis!

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~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-30-1999 08:37 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is absolutely wonderful
Systematic Decay
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since 09-15-99
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That place with padded walls a


4 posted 09-30-1999 08:48 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

great poem, Im at a loss for words

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 09-30-1999 09:36 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I thought you all would like to read a 'happier' poem then the one I wrote when I got home Thanks for taking the time to read it!!

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~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~
johnt300
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6 posted 10-01-1999 07:27 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Beautiful!!!
Nan
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7 posted 10-01-1999 07:34 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Echo - You're very good - I'm very glad you're still hanging around with us.... Nice job...
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


8 posted 10-01-1999 02:28 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Echo, your talent is showing itself. This is very nice. Hope to see more soon.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-01-1999).]
Pepper
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9 posted 10-01-1999 04:20 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

beautiful Echo.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Echo Rhayne
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10 posted 10-27-1999 04:29 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thanks John, Nan, Sunshine, and Pepper for your comments!

I found this back on page 25 or something LoL, and I like it so I am being selfish and bringing it back up to the top...it's not very often I like one of my own poems! Hope ya'll like it too, if not, it wouldnt be the first time


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

Denise
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11 posted 10-27-1999 06:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another great one that I missed. This is excellent, Echo, simply wonderful!

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Denise
WhtDove
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12 posted 10-27-1999 06:12 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WOW girl! This was beautifully written. I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Munda
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13 posted 10-27-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Wonderful !
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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14 posted 10-27-1999 06:29 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Echo...you have great talent, this was very well written. It all flows together nicely
Watcher666
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15 posted 10-27-1999 11:44 PM       View Profile for Watcher666   Email Watcher666   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watcher666's Home Page   View IP for Watcher666

Beautiful!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Echo Rhayne
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16 posted 10-28-1999 01:10 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Denise...Thank you kindly!

Rebecca...Glad you liked it, thanks for reading!

Munda...Thank you kindly!

Ruth...Hmmmm, talent? Nope, but thanks! Glad you liked it, considering it is one of the only poems I actually like LoL The other ones I kind of like too I wont post for um personal reasons

Watcher...Thank you kindly!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

H. Arlequin
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17 posted 10-30-1999 11:48 PM       View Profile for H. Arlequin   Email H. Arlequin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit H. Arlequin's Home Page   View IP for H. Arlequin

HA applauds
Echo Rhayne
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18 posted 10-30-1999 11:52 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thank you kindly!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

 
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