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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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I walked among the fallen leaves, and felt your hand in mine; I turned to speak and naught was there, but gnarled trees entwined. I sat along the winter's beach, and heard your steps near me, when I looked up to see your face, a gull flew out to sea. Among the flowers in springtime green, I sat in mild repose. You touched my cheek, I reached for you, and found my brightest rose. In summer's shade my thoughts go back; thru' mounded years they send, my memories to the time I found a new and loving friend. ------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Echo, just beautiful.. ------------------ What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny, compared to what lies within us. ~Isis~ |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thank you Isis!  ------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is absolutely wonderful |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
great poem, Im at a loss for words ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I thought you all would like to read a 'happier' poem then the one I wrote when I got home Thanks for taking the time to read it!!------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Beautiful!!! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Echo - You're very good - I'm very glad you're still hanging around with us.... Nice job... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Echo, your talent is showing itself. This is very nice. Hope to see more soon. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-01-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
beautiful Echo....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thanks John, Nan, Sunshine, and Pepper for your comments! I found this back on page 25 or something LoL, and I like it so I am being selfish and bringing it back up to the top...it's not very often I like one of my own poems! Hope ya'll like it too, if not, it wouldnt be the first time  ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another great one that I missed. This is excellent, Echo, simply wonderful! ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOW girl! This was beautifully written. I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Wonderful ! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Echo...you have great talent, this was very well written. It all flows together nicely |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Denise...Thank you kindly! Rebecca...Glad you liked it, thanks for reading! Munda...Thank you kindly! Ruth...Hmmmm, talent? Nope, but thanks! Glad you liked it, considering it is one of the only poems I actually like LoL The other ones I kind of like too I wont post for um personal reasons Watcher...Thank you kindly! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
HA applauds |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thank you kindly! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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