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suthern
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0 posted 09-30-1999 07:37 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suthern

It would be so easy to say
"He hurt me so... She's being mean!"
But I'm on "outs" with more than one
And thus a pattern must be seen.
I can't say that it did not hurt
To learn I am a lousy friend.
I'd rather blame them for my pain
But I can no longer pretend.
Though I believe I'm in the right
Perhaps it's not the "he" or "she"
As much as I hate to admit
I think the problem lies with me!

© Copyright 1999 suthern - All Rights Reserved
LngJhnAg
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1 posted 09-30-1999 07:43 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Hi there, Belle. This is an interesting poem, and it reminds of days of yore on another board with other people. But never with you.
Toerag
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2 posted 09-30-1999 07:55 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

REally well done sweets...I don't know diddly bout math and I still liked it?....
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3 posted 09-30-1999 07:56 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Drinking coffee, warm and snug
Suthern: here's a special HUG

Don't be too late for work..

HUSG


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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

suthern
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4 posted 09-30-1999 09:14 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

LJA: I'm definitely a doghouse resident to some of those! LOL. But I can live with that "disgrace." *EG* Thanks, sailor...

Toerag: Thanks, sweetie... liking it is all I ask... *G* No math test today! LOL.

RG: Even late, I was one of the first ones here! *G* (But I still haven't had my coffee! *G*)
JTF
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5 posted 09-30-1999 09:46 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

ok Auntie, if liking it is all you ask, then Frog likes it as well ...

SMOOCH

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6 posted 09-30-1999 10:08 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

great poem, to be able to look inside and say, maybe, just maybe I need some reworking, is a good quality, one I appreciate in a friend, who wants a friend who is always right? one who can give and take is just perfect

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suthern
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7 posted 09-30-1999 10:34 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Froggie: I saw those licks!! LOL.

Lovey: Amen! *G* (Not that anyone will get an always right friend in me! LOL)

Thanks to both of you!
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wonderful work suthern.........to search ones soul is very hard and to admit ones wrongs is even harder.......I love your work.........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Dark Angel
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9 posted 10-01-1999 06:35 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Suthern, this is a great poem, well done!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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10 posted 10-01-1999 06:37 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

So well said.
suthern
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11 posted 10-01-1999 08:05 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Pepper, Dark Angel & UK Hero: Thank you all very much!
WhtDove
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12 posted 10-01-1999 08:13 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Suthern it is well done! I ditto Pepper up there. It is hard to look inside. But we love ya just the way you are!
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13 posted 10-01-1999 08:45 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

*grumbles*
Why is it that poeple here always make me want to fix myself? lol
good poem

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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14 posted 03-08-2008 03:39 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

This little keeper will fit well in my wallet.  Words to take out and review from time to time.  

suthern, I am missing you.

Alison
 
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